I like these a lot. I would hope your subjects would be delighted. The processing is excellent too. I liked the B&Ws but the colour ones look even better.
I am not keen on the first one but I cannot exactly say why - something to do with the lipstick being very dark, I think. She doesn't look comfortable in 5, and 12 looks too posed and static.
On the other hand, 2, 3, 6, 8, 9,12 and 13 are each really good and together make a super set. 2, 3 and 9 are outstanding. The clipped shoe in 9 bugs me but I think that is just a photographer's view and the subjects shouldn't care.