some pics from a place called ware

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charlie-ray o,connor
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hello there
i thought i could start building some reputation around here by postings some pictures from the canals at ware.
most of them are underexposed bad or just complete and utter rubbish but your comments are welocme.:)

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WOULD LOVE TO HEAR YOUR COMMENTS
thanks
charlie
 
Ok I will appologise before I start, but you did ask
1) out of focus
2) Hmm water
3) rather soft and possibley a little OOF too It may well stand a bit of sharpening
4) do all the canals in Ware run up hill? Watch your horizons, can be brought back with a little bit of "photo shopping"
5) Hmm trees........soft again try sharpening
 
thanks for all your comments.
copyright deliberately spelled wrong (it stands out)
 
There are some problems but there is hope too :)

Cobras comments are right but it's not all bad news.

1 is not in focus on the berries and has too much to pick out a subject - but you saw the shot even if it didn't quite come off.
2 has no subject
3 is Ok but again has nothing to hold your attention as the main subject.
4 is wonky and could have been good. You have obviously seen the reflection but you need to compose the scene not just put it in the middle. I don't do editing but i had a 2 minute bodge at it to try and show what I mean...
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5 again no strong subject and the fence looks abit ugly.

Keep trying. you are obviously noticing things and that is the first step.
 
robertp, many thanks.
your photo shopped version looks much better.
 
same as above really.... and... copyright only has one 'P' ! ;)
 
thanks all again for your advice.
i deliberately spelly copyright wrong for my own reasons and to make em stand out
 
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