The ever fading stranger

[mark4183]

So this is another idea I have had in my book I wanted to do for a while... hmmm, and was reasonably happy with the outcome without faffing (adding more to the umbrella to define it more) around much more and totally ruining it.

I appreciate its marmite, but I like it... thanks for looking

The ever fading stranger... by Mark Lightfoot, on Flickr

 

[Terrywoodenpic]

I was not aware it was an umbrella till you said so.

It might work better with out the red.

But the more I look at it the better I like it.

 

[SteveSc]

It might work better with out the red..

That was my initial thought as well but having looked at it longer I think it might lose the umbrella even more without it.

I do like it but feel it could do with slightly more definition in the front of the face/hat area.

 

[Norkie]

I like this, but I also think it needs something, just not sure what, sorry.

Maybe, because he is supposed to be disappearing h e could be more pronounced on his back half and fade to the front?

Like it

 

[ancient_mariner]

I'd rather see the man at lower density, than see the branches from a completely separate image all going in the wrong direction showing through. He also looks too large in the frame compared to the trunks around him.

Hope that's useful.