Took the kids to the studio.

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What do you think. (we played outside...alot)

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Loving No1. Like the framing.

2 looks blown to me - face and hands.

3 I find the part of the wall that is in focus distracting

4 Beautiful. Much better conversion than 2 and 3. Only crit, rhs of sofa arm cropped.

Summary - 1 and 4 KEEPERS!!!!
 
For me with #1 I am not a fan of the horizontal going through across her body.
#2, as said above, hands and face a little bit too bright, could be down to P&P perhaps.
Also with 1&2, not keen on the aspect ratio of the crop and with #2 it's ashame, imho to have the top of the head cropped.
I like #3 a lot, and the in-focus part of wall is not bothering me.
I like #4, but feel the bg should either be lit more to show the enviroment or completely black, as the bits that do show are a little distracting for me. Tje small couch doe look like it's floating a bit too, if you get what I mean.

Just my humble thoughts...
 
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