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raythefab

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I took these yesterday have i got the water right comments welcome please:)
River Brock
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Langden Brook
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Langden Brook
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No too sure about #1 think its missing somthing, but #2 and 3 are really nice, think #3 is my favourite just seems to work.

Matt
 
I am no expert as my post count shows, but the water looks too soft and in #2 and #3 doesn't quite match the rugged landscape around it, giving what to my eye is a false appearance.
 
Nice shots, but i reckon #1 could have done to be dead-on centre...?
 
I like #3 the best. The first ones framing looks off, did you crop it? If so, are there any other ways you could crop it?
 
#3 for me, I think the bridge finishes it off. #2 is good too but #1, for me, lacks a real point of interest, maybe if you could see further up the river it may add something? Love the milky water though (y)
 
Sigmamark said:
I am no expert as my post count shows, but the water looks too soft and in #2 and #3 doesn't quite match the rugged landscape around it, giving what to my eye is a false appearance.
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Its supposed to look soft:)
 
raythefab said:
Its supposed to look soft:)
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I know, but to me it seems a bit too soft and like I said, to my eye, seemed somehow false. Arty yes definitely, so perhaps I need to keep away from commenting on the arty stuff (or perhaps all the stuff);)
 
No1 Again, this didnt look right to me thats why i cropped it what do you think:thinking:
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