It was okay on the points queried, but...
Do you mind there being a but ???
The About me page's wording doesn't make sense. You also flick from 3rd to 1st person (and I have no idea why you started in 3rd anyway);
canvas' is wrong, should be
canvasses ; and the penultimate sentence needs rewording; it's
reasonable not
resonable; you have inconsistency in the use of a full-stop; and you use both
photoshoot and
photo shoot as another inconsistency
I don't mean those comments to belittle you or your site, but if anyone is considering booking you as a Pro then their first impression shouldn't have them querying your wording - which could be taken as looking like you have a problem with attention to detail; not a good trait for a photographer to have :shake:
So I hope you find this useful rather than antagonistic (which it's not)
All it needs is for you to get someone, or several, to proof-read it for you, and these sorts of errors will be easily corrected
Some nice shots too if I may say so
Good Luck btw
DD