What do you guys think?

[ktbkr]

Here's a very small selection of pictures from a recent shoot (to gain experience). Please could you give me some feedback re my Composition, Lighting, PP etc .. The little boy was covered in bruises so I tried my best to disguise this.

1)

[/url] 43 by ktbkr87, on Flickr[/IMG]

2)

[/url] 7 by ktbkr87, on Flickr[/IMG]

3)
57 by ktbkr87, on Flickr

4)
54 by ktbkr87, on Flickr

5)
50 by ktbkr87, on Flickr

6)
56 by ktbkr87, on Flickr

Many thanks in advance,

 

[ktbkr]

I forgot to add my personal favorite

[/url] 42 by ktbkr87, on Flickr[/IMG]

 

[lensflair]

A few of the shots appear a little overexposed, I'm not sure if this is the 'look' you were going for though. I like the composition on the first and last shots.

Watch your background in shots like number 5 where the fence is cutting through the little boys head. The last one would be great if they were looking at you, they are probably looking at a parent?

I would lose number 3, unfortunate hand placement.

Some nice ones there though, I'm sure the parents will love them.

 

[Deleted member 34016]

Most of the white in the mono shots are "burnt out" you need to expose for this

I like the personal fave image although that seems a tad over exposed too, If you look at the girls dress there is no detail - same with the little boys jumper, just pure white

Les

 

[Gary Coyle]

Overexposed the whole set

 

[Photodiva]

Hi. i prefer the one against a plain bg and you captured the group nicely. OOF bgs work best, I think. I'm not keen on the green bubbles. This look is very 'venture' and is overexposed, for my taste.

 

[HeadshotLondon]

You captured kids' and atmosphere really well.