In picture 1 there is a door handle on the models's right our left as viewing the image, this irritates the hell out of me, the lights I don't mind as they are not intrusive. Of the two pictures I prefer image two, you have moved slightly left which has removed the offending handle from the first, the image is just that much nicer IMHO.
But I am being picky, you have a lovely lady to photograph and if she is willing to be your muse then well done you, the images are great congratulations.