Zainab

[saul01]

One from a family wedding. Starting to enjoy shooting now (more confident) , but must keep an eye on detail.

As always comments and advise welcome.

[url=https://flic.kr/p/DHFF3U]Zainab by saul, on Flickr[/URL]

 

[Kodiak Qc]

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Very exotic model!

I see two things here,
• the WB is too cold
• the DR, though well extended had forced mid tones.
This has the consequence to make the gold look rather
white and render her skin tones too thin. See PM…

 

[saul01]

Thank you Kodiak. My pp is not that good at the moment. Paying more attention to shooting, and less on pp.
Will have another attempt at it again tomorrow.[emoji106]

 

[Pitter]

Lovely shot but the skin tones on the face seem too close to the fabrick color. Not sure why that is.

 

[saul01]

Lovely shot but the skin tones on the face seem too close to the fabrick color. Not sure why that is.

probably my pp skills!

 

[reheat module]

That is a beautiful portrait, and has (with a little colour tweaking), the opportunity to be absolutely vibrant.
Hope Kodiak has provided sound advice for you in the PM.
I'd love to see a warmer, vibrant rendition.

 

[saul01]

After yesterday's comments, tried pp again. Hopefully got it right this time.

Zainab 2 by saul, on Flickr