Oh what the hell ... I already have an NSFW on my thread (not that I think this recent post warrants same ) but after having done the shoot tonight I couldn't let it go to waste, despite the fact that it may not be technically correct .... but if I don't post ... how will I ever learn .... so after much personal debate I am going to do it!
It is a follow on from last week's theme of sensual .... but hope it has a bit more 'kick ass' to it.
I'm hoping for a bit more of a relaxed theme this week ... I think we all need it! The last few have been quite challenging to say the least!!!!
Anywayz here is my last attempt at 'Elaborate' rather late than never (and hopefully the last of this series!):
[/url] Time (9759) by crystal_singer (drodd), on Flickr[/IMG]
[/url] Elaborate by crystal_singer (drodd), on Flickr[/IMG]
Yes it is an elaboration of last week, but I couldn't think of anything better, so well timed.
What do you think?
Cheers
Dawn
dawn........ the setup didn't work for me... the bottle, the colour seemed all wrong, sorry..maybe that just me and why i don't do this sort of thing, maybe it was any PP you did ...boxes excused as i'm a voyeur in their lives...
...but onto your next submission???
and where was the NSFW this time (i knew of the first set of posts).... where was the NotSafeForPplOfDickyTickers .... the mono looks good..i will comment no further for fear of breaching my blood pressure imposed by the doctor..though composition of the colour and the alignment of heels was nothing i studied too closely but did think worked far better... slight angle of lower leg adds wonders to the colour again... ... i know my doctor does have a wonderful bedside manner first thing in the morning ..but please for her sake...no more... my poor heartses can't take it.. and she has to get to work
..but how do you expect to read the time if some'one asks you, when its all the way down there..???
Hiya Dawn, I am going to go for the black and white version on this one, also looking on your flickr, the black and white one which has the extra space is really good too, I can't make my mind up which I prefer, I keep thinking the ones you have posted here are a little tight. Also I have been trying to think of other ways to have your legs positioned bang: sorry couldn't think of another way to word that ) but I can't think of anything that would improve these. A great take on elaborate.
Nice idea Dawn.
As Adie noted, there are some harsh shadows there.
I remember trying to control the shadows off the heels in my 'style' shot, it wasn't easy.
The reflection on the watch catches my eye too, which is a little distracting, and I'd prefer a little more space in the left of the frame.
All that said though, I like them.
I think I'm a fan of the colour version.
OK Dawn,
You've up'ed your game, so I'm gonna be harsher in my criticism
Firstly, great idea to use something different to showcase the watch and well done for being brave enough to be the model. Not easy as you know.
You have great legs, so a good choice there :nuts:
However, the composition needs a bit more work. A good rule of thumb when shooting feet is the near foot should be between 90 and 45 degrees off set from the rear foot. So the near foot could have done with pointing into the shot slightly by turning it to camera a few degrees, then the rear foot could turn outwards and move slightly right. This would fill the shot, and balance it better. Also, you should pose with your weight on the rear foot, this turns the near leg naturally, and flatters the calf shape. (Which you can see you have started to do in the second shot)
I'm not a great fan of "ON CAMERA FLASH" and here you can clearly see you used it, as it gives unflattering shadows. I think you now have the skills to let some natural light into the room, and use that to give softer lit (but still well exposed) photos.
Overall, I like this, I love the concept, and think this is a whole magnitude of improvement over your previous efforts.
Keep at it, I'm enjoying this journey
Hiya Dawn
Wow - you've been very busy since I last looked in here. Looks like you're getting a lot out of this 52 . . . you even managed to restrain yourself from diving into your birthday treats before you'd got a shot of them.
While I like the "official" elaborate birthday shot because of what it shows, I have to say that the B&W elaboration on the sensual theme edges it on artistic merit. It has a certain elegance and simplicity to it that works well.
This is another one where I can't resist commenting on some other shots, although I promised to restrict myself to last week's
Both the woodland fairy series for hidden (I absolutely love that coat BTW) and the wedding dress shot (can't remember what theme that was) stand out for me. Creative, well executed and a pleasure to look at.
Elaborate (second picture) with the watch on the ankle.. lovely. Prefer it over #1 of those as you have a hint of the left leg. I'm 50/50 on the flash/light reflected on it. Good composition tho
Hiya Dawn
I think the colour image works better, the flash on the watch is very distracting unfortunately it kills the overall effect IMHO, however there are measures you can take to avoid unwated reflection,
1. Diffusion of flash - basically fitting a diffuser over the flash to help spread the light and make it less harsh, even a plain piece of paper could do this with some elastic bands
2. Bounce flash - exactly as the title says, it's a method of bouncing the flash off a ceiling, wall, reflector ect.
3 Manual control - If you want direct lighting without harsh light, try dialing down your flash gun's power, or if you are using the pop up flash, it should be in the menus to allow you to set the power output of the flash.
Nice idea, love the composition
Hi, well I know bugger all about on or off camera flash I won't comment too much on that aspect of the photograph, save to say the upper side of the shoes (nnniiiicceee shoes, BTW) seems over exposed and the light in the watch (very nice watch, BTW, I simply don't have the legs to carry that one off ).
#1 is nice but #2 is really great. Like the red BG and I can kind of see what Adie is saying about composition. In #2 I think a slight front left angle photograph would work.
Anyway, as has been said, nice legs and big for once again pushing your boundaries.
Cheers.
Hi Dawn, I've found my way back to the 52.
just had a quick look through your last three weeks shots.
Rescue: you're processing on this shot did what you set out to do. First thing I thought when I saw it was that there was a fire. As you said faults could be picked with it technically but it fits the theme and the processing makes the shot more dramatic. Good rescue.
Sensual: This was my first idea too but fishnets on hairy legs don't really say sensual quite the same.
Elaborate: Happy birthday! (belated) I noticed earlier when you posted on my thread that there was a new camera in your profile. Now I know why and why you asked about my birthday (6th too)
I think my favourite part of the shot is the enlarged shadow of the glass. Maybe worth trying to replicate that part of it with a smoother background, more as a product type shot and not for this theme.
Looking forward to seeing shots with your 50mm it really is a fantastic lens and I'm sure you will have a great time with it.
Thanks again for popping past .... and hey... I now know who celebrate birthday with next year
Indeed, and I'l be 28 again next year. Won't be long until it's the 28th time I've celebrated that.
Hi Dawn, sory I haven't posted that much lately but am going to try to make more time over the remainder of this 52. (how do you keep with the pace and keep in touch so well, you are a real trooper!!)
Elaborate: Like alot of the others I think the B&W shot is the better of the two. The processing with the viginette and the composition make the improvement.
Celebrate: Congrats on the new toy and hope it bring you many great shots. Im not sure about this shot though as I feel that it is missing something?? It is a nice idea all the same
Sensual: A great set there. (both legs and pics ) You've obviously went to alot of trouble with these with the set-up and props. The last one tops the lot for me.
Rescue: As you say the pic lacks clarity but this doesnt matter one bit as the grainy feel matches the subject.
Hidden: Some lovely bright abstract pics here. I like the fibre optic ones (I must admit that I thought this was fireworks at first glance) Some real atristic creativity going on in your head
Twisted: A great clean crisp shot there!!
Hi Ya
sorry for taking to so long to catch up with your thread
Elaborate 1....nice lens there missus...always good to treat your self on your special day & with cake too Love the set up & lighting as well
Elaborate...beautiful ankle chain....bang on theme as usual , prefer the color verions for more detail in the watch face & love the contrast between the backdrop & the shoes
What with your Sensual shot & the elaborate shot me thinks you have a naughty side
HA! At least you managed to get my best side.....the camera is always my best side hope your camera survived the shot!
& fear not ms Drodd....I have some of you lurking somewhere on the memory cards...
Now I'm really looking forward to the 52's get together...
I'm hoping to get the sheffield event photo's sorted this weekend ....along with 300-400 from the last 2 days as I've been down to Longleat Safari....& already planning n plotting how to fund a return trip
Mug Shot wars.
I'll have to grow a comb over for our meet, just so I look my best!
No crit tonight but I have liked what I have seen so far....
Looks like you like to be the model....:nuts: I will take some images of you when you come to mine soon....
Dave
Hiya Dave
. only selective parts of me I'm also looking forward to you getting some good shots of me and Reuben .... and hopefully I will be able to get some great shot for you and your family too (under your coaching) .... I
Have a great weekend!
Cheers
Dawn
I will take whatever images you want and feel comfy with.
You will leave mine with some awesome images of reuben. Taken by myself & you. We will also get shots of the two of you together....
What would you guys like for tea... chinese or indian... " My treat..."
Just let me know when you will be arriving and I will sort out something to do for everyone ....
See you soon
dawn...these shots are good..i love them... good capture for the theme...
roo in the fountains of life???... and a mono conversion... brilliant..glad to see you had good weather...we got the sun about 3 o'clock ..but by then i was a drowned rat... with no pictures)