really like the second juxtaposition pic I know what you mean about not being happy with the last few posts I feel the same way my last 3 have been rubbish to be honest. I am sure you will be back on form soon
I like the no1 juxtaposition, good candid shot.
Well had an idea straight away.
Isabelle at Brownies.
Jackie at the gym.
Then it all went wrong :bonk:
1. house stinks of cigarette smoke
2. left camera on ISO 2000
3. while trying to get rid of the cigarette smoke with incense sticks burned the kitchen surface.
4. mouth tastes like an ashtray....
I''ll stop there while I pack.
Anyway, here's my letter and it's been a pleasure knowing you.
Damn it....Flickr's down so can't upload...
Cheers.
The noise doesn't hurt that at all for me. Great idea and a really striking image.
You might wanna try vaping when attempting similar shots in future, for the sake of domestic harmony!
the noise is not a problem suits the image, well done for being able to blow a smoke ring I assume you were a smoker once. nicely placed in the frame and a good BG
Smoking in bed again, Mr Harris...??
a perfect 'letter' O, well done. Great job on the background, your commitment to the cause is commendable!
Noise gives an almost ghostly feel to the ring, works well!
I like the second Juxtaposition, made me chuckle.
The O is good, well smoked but it's too noisey for my liking. I like the way you have positioned it on a third though.
Go on, gizza clue
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Its a quote from a film called Go To Blazes if I recall .....you're too young to have seen it I'm sure Andy ...
Ah, I googled your quote but nothing came up
Apologies for not dropping in sooner this week Andy, work has been full on and the week isn't over yet
Anyway, onto your image, it is certainly bang on theme.
You have mentioned the noise in the photograph, as you say high iso wasn't your friend here.
You've done well capturing it, I am sure it couldn't have been easy blowing then capturing the smoke rings with decent composition.
Not much more to be said Andy, another theme out tomorrow, onward and upward eh?
I also think the second juxtaposition shot works better than the first, which might have been better with the guy looking to his left (ie across the fram rather than out of it)?
Letter is brilliant; maybe not worth a divorce, though!
I like your first entry for Juxtaposition Andy, this it is well done. Your idea for letter is very original, well thought out, I don't see the noise as too much of a problem. Good job and hope you're not too much in bother :bonk:
Yeah, I Gree with the others. I think the noise actually helps. Nice shot and I really like the positioning in the frame.
Hi matey
I've never managed to blow smoke rings so well impressed with this one ( little things.....) The noise adds to the image for me , nice black bg
Has Jackie noticed the burn yet
Hi Andy
Juxtaposition, it has to be number two for me. Number one fits the theme but two stands out for me. I like the bright green grass and sharp focus on the sign against the BG. I like the DOF on this one, it adds more depth for me.
Letter, I wondered what it was at first then read what you had done. I hope having one little dirty smelly cig hasn't made you wish for more? I like the graininess, it suits this image and you've done well catching it on camera
The burn mark hasn't been noticed...yet!
Hi Andy
Letter - great idea and well handled. Good comp and the graininess helps with the ethereal feel. Quite spooky
Hi Andy
Electric - good enough for a grab shot - on theme. Prefer the colour version as more interest in the shot with the warmth of the wood and it looks more like a set of steps. But that is a strange bit of cloning in the wood on the second step - and i am not sure why you have done it cos the studs add to the image IMO.
Hi Andy
Electric - good enough for a grab shot - on theme. Prefer the colour version as more interest in the shot with the warmth of the wood and it looks more like a set of steps. But that is a strange bit of cloning in the wood on the second step - and i am not sure why you have done it cos the studs add to the image IMO.
+1 about the possible cloning, but prefer it in colour, feels a bit flat to me in b&w
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. It seem better, my symmetrical I thought, without the stud.
Cheers.
Cheers all and I've now completed 22.16% of TP52 2013
Just looking at b&w now, I still like the studs because they are not symmetrical. The shortened upper wood and the misalignment of the studs emphasise the receding and height of the steps so that the theme is satisfied but there is other interst too IMO.
Liking the colour one more - even with the attempt at cloning. Didn't notice they were steps to start with, but see it now, love the wear in the centre that you get on old stone steps.
a full 1% ahead of everyone else.....
I think that is a really interesting shot. Like the range of soft colours and the horizontality.
not sure which one I like best both good in their own way nice textures only crit would be a slight crop from the bottom
Sometimes I think I must have a lot to learn. I can't latch on to this at all. I'm stumped.
Sorry mate, wasn't being rude - just an honest comment.
Wish I understood this photo(s) better so I could offer better critique.
I like that B&w one; lovely textures and lines.
Sometimes quick grabs are the best shots of all.