OK Kev, your Betty H photos:
1 very good. Nice composition, nice natural look, great catch lights. Just needs a bit of PP to brighten the dull washed out grey of her brolly, and that should just give the shot a lift.
2. Nice shot but you cropped her picnic basket boo boo.. (sorry) I think the whole thing would have worked a little better if she had that hand free.
3. The composition is annoying on this one, as I am really drawn to her ink sleeve, and I can't see enough of her tats and I think that smile would have worked wonders with eye contact. Great catch lights though.
Weird is cracking
Celebration is a great fun filled shot. Just a few niggles. The door handles top middle, the happy birthday hat has been cropped as has the left hand sleeve.
Evolution. Great idea, but maybe it needs more photoshopping to add a projection to the hologram, the sort of Starwars "help me Obiwan Kenobi, you're my only hope" type look.. Just some ideas.
Keep up the good work.
Adie