Home studio shots

Nice shots, all of them, but the crops don't work at all. Far too much dead space adding nothing to the images in my opinion. Works a little better for the last one because of the angled pose and vignette.

The other two would suit a tighter crop, or even 1x1.
 
Love the last one, you should save this to embarrass her with when she's older.

I agree with Adam (@UaeExile) about the crops on the first two, and this applies to the one just above too. Shaheed (@Sir SR) IMO has the "landscape and on a third" format down to a fine art. He crops much closer to the top of the subject (sometime the top of the head goes too). See these shots for examples
https://www.talkphotography.co.uk/threads/a-few-pics.585950/
 
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Hi

Just on my phone as I can't get to my computer. I like the interaction in the pics which to me is always the starting point. At first I thought it was the fall off from your light but looking again it looks like vignette. The vignette doesn't really work for me.

These shots would be improved by different crops. Square in the first and tighter on the third.

S

Edit quick I phone crop to illustrate. The third one I can't get exactly how I want but you get the idea

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