The edits are awful, to be blunt lol.
All the original needs is a touch of contrast added and maybe the highlights lowered a little.
If shooting in JPG, you can adjust the picture styles to suit, or if shooting RAW, then use Lightroom and you can adjust to your hearts content, although dont go overboard as it just looks unnatural.
SteelMagnets edit is pretty much on the money, I might have added a little more clarity slider, as I like my images to be a bit grittier, but its down to personal taste