I like the first a lot but I’m not totally sold on the styling. The combination of high neck, low brim and short skirt kind of divide her into chunks which shorten her body, if that makes sense.
I like the second one too. It looks a little over-posed – I wouldn’t have both hands in the shot, and probably wouldn’t have had even one unless I could see elegant fingers too.
And this is an arguable point, but I reckon that if I’ve chosen to use hard light sources from an angle which exaggerate every minor blemish then it’s incumbent on me – for this type of glamorous portrait – to do a significant amount of skin retouching.
The third one is gorgeous, btw, really expressive.
Is she an actual model?