I can see the intent but for me it does not quite "say that to me" as the space between them is maybe that bit too big.
They are that bit too small in the frame and the right-hand swan's reflection is cut off, plus there are green areas in the background that are brighter than others and they draw the eye away from the primary subject.
…maybe their first rendez-vous?
peut être but maybe you are over anthropomorphic about them
That's called poésie, dear Sir!