Hmmm...chalk n cheese..on theme for sure , good black bg , just not sure about the items....is that chalk dust like you mark a pitch out with ? & the cheese looks like it may have seen better days...though that could be the effect of a macro shot....good shot it the making just needs a touch more work to really to really pop...sorry if that sounds harsh , just saying what I see
Electric...these bloomin smart phones have pretty darn decent cameras on them....big shame about your 'puter but on the up side it gave you the shot for the theme
Letter.....sad to see that letter box taken out of service.....well spotted & liemthe sort of desaturated feel to it...in keeping with feel of the postbox...if that makes any sense ?
Direction...yup , mono works a treat , just a shame about the chimney
Tacky...like it , plenty of detail in the whole shot...keeps my eye wandering around ..well spotted & pp'd