lovely singular white rose there, the green of the stem is just dark enough to not jump out at you, but leads nicely to the rose head bit.
Beautifully sharp, but also retaining the softness of the petals at the same time, and great brightness to it, but also still keeping the texture of the petals. Very well done.
Barbed wire is a simple idea, but executed well..... super detail and sufficient DOF to get both the main prongs in sharp focus. love the bright green mottled BG there too.
Hi Lynne,
Mono... Love it beautifully done, yes its mono as in one for those who doubt, I like the pov too
twisted... simple but on theme I like the composition and dof
Hi Lynne both excellent the rose is excellent really stands out, nicely placed too
barbed wire simple but very effective with a great BG
Hi Lynne....the rose is a beautiful shot, perfectly placed against the stark black background, and an excellent choice in the white rose.
Twisted.....on theme, and nicely focused against the green background.
Action - two superb shots can't fault either off them.
mono - wonderful composition, love the simplicity off it nice work.
Twisted - fits the theme, but sadly does not hold my attention for long. The focusing is great, and the composition, just lacks the wow factor for me sorry.
Hi Lynne, as said, the rose is excellent, sharp, clear, great detail, really stands out from the black bg
Good detail in the barbed wire, composition, dof works well
Lynne first off appologies for not commenting on all your photos... playing catch up with fellow 52'ers can be long winded at times...
I like the twisted shot... as said before the DOF is spot on and corner to corner also works...
Mono - good take on the singular aspect... different perspective...
love the Mono image,
Hi Lynne
I keep typing to you all my apologies for being behind - i don't know how I get so far back - Big kick up ....
Step - brilliant . Unique idea and very well handled. The exposure on the model, the light bulb and the reflection are really good. I prefer the later edit with the less black space but not sure that the 'broken glass' on the floor adds anything - it is supposed to be surreal so does not have to be too literal for me. I would not know how to do what you have done but shouldn't the right foot be in contact with its reflection as it is on the floor - or is he jumping .. Anyway
Natural - I am going to be out of step and opt for #1. It has an ethereal quality. Good focus and soft dof. #2 - I don't care much for the colour of the border nor the rather blowsy lighting of the flower. #3 is v. good and the border fits well.
Action - #1 has it all - action in the angle of the bike, the boot, the curve and that great sand/dirt spray. #2 is good but cannot stand up to the comparison.
Mono - the single theme works well and as the green stem is so understated, the white rose and the black b/k have a mono feel. Good lighting and detail in the petals. I may have tried a square (er) crop.
Twisted - on theme good colours - given the quality and effort in the other 4 weeks this is fine - it fits the bill.
Hey Lynne
Action - Well what can be said other than Fantastic, that first shot with the flying dirt trail is excellent, both really well lit, super action shots to say the least, damn I would love to take shots like that
Mono - Liking your idea of singular for the theme... struggling to crit this one, stem coming from the corner works well with the crop, nice black backgound, white flower very well exposed considering the large contrast in tones, super soft detail too - Nice
Twisted - Wish I has thought of that, love a bit of barbed wire (i WILL get a shot into my 52 one way or another) Bang on sharpness, perfect DoF and Crop, loving the background again too, again can't give any crit
Hi Lynne - Action - great shots the lighting is excellent. Mono also a great shot can't find anything wrong with that either. Well done
Hi Lynne, long time no comment
#1 on action gets my vote, its the most dynamic between the two. Composition works well too, with the rider coming into the frame really gives a sense of you being right in the thick of the action.
Mono, flawless a real Blondie signature shot IMHO. Lighting, composition, everything perfect. The negative space works well here too.
Twisted, again bang on theme, strong diagonal composition, simple yet effective.
Mono - Playing to your strengths I see damn good image, I can't fault it
Twisted, on theme, good dof and nice background.
Fresh - what a fabulous shot, fits the them perfectly. A nice clean and clear white background and very well presented, nice colours and details and details in the strawberries.
Seems like we had a similar idea this week. I like the fact you left a strawberry outside the bowl it really helps the composition.
Thanks Susie for the comments & checking the website , much appreciated feedbackHi Lynne...what's not to like about that one ... a really super pic ... crisp, clean and bang on theme.
One small thing ... it would have to be Cornish Clotted Cream for me
Will send you a message about the website.
Hi Lynne,
Can't please some people can you! lovely, luscious, yummy, strawberries and they want cream too! lovely shot I like the composition and the white bg adding the extra strawberry finishes it off nicely
Fresh, cracker. The colours really emphasise the theme. Well composed and good overall lighting. I did think ago uld a little more definite along the left and right edge of glass....maybe
Cheers.
Hi Lynne, excellent product shot, the reflection in the glass is a small distraction but the strawberries are really well lit very striking
I think cream would have messed up the shot so glad there is non there
will have a look at your website
HI Lynne
Mono - wonderful crisp clear backround works well
Twisted - Simple but effective nicely done
Fresh - Colours really stand out, lots of detail well lit
Nice vivid colours and nice use of the shadow under the lone strawberry, I have to agree with Allan about the cream, glad there's non there
I don't think the reflections detract from the image in any way, rather they add to it. Glass reflects after all.
FRESH: amazing!
I wondered about strawberries... this is fantastic - it's lovely and clean and certainly fresh. Great colour in those reds and greens. Great job.
yum, lovely strawberries, well lit, well composed, well presented.
great job!
Hi Lynne
Fresh - weel composed and lovely colours. I think that the fact that the strawberries are not really red adds to the freshness of the shot. Good idea re the one o/s the glass - nice touch and well postitioned.
Minor crit would be, like Andy, that the rhs and lhs side of the glass are a little ill defined and I am not sure why the vignette is only at the top and not the bottom
Looked at your website - quite impressed. It is clear, uncluttered and the typefaces work well. Folder 05.05.14 has a novel naming system - blue. black. green
Home page photo has real impact
Yummy! The colours look great to me - proper seasonal British-looking strawberries - not like those deep red imported ones that you can get all year round
Nothing to add to what's already been said, so I'll just give you a
Hey Lynne
Fresh - I hear what your saying about picking your product
I like your work on this one, agree it needs shadows to ground the fruit, not sure how you would get rid of the reflections, first thing I would do would be the poloriser, was it flash ??
Nice looking fruit, super white background, good space at the bottom of the frame, not sure if the top could give a tad - all in all really like it, very fresh and summery