Apart from Jim's smaller image, I resized the images to 1100 pixels high to compare them. This is a decent size to view, enjoy and contemplate the images. What was going on “under the surface” that I couldn't see at that size was of no concern to me.
David – pookeyhead
For me this is a picture of land, sky, setting sun and water, all fairly evenly balanced in brightness, all contributing to the whole. The visibility of the beach and wooded cliffs gives a sense of place for me, a sense of a sunset happening somewhere specific rather than a more anonymous “setting sun with clouds”. The visibility of the beach and cliffs also let me see shafts of sunlight pour across the beach and in front of the cliffs. I would have preferred the light, straight line of the sewage outfall pipe to have been removed, although its direction mirrors that of the water line above it so it isn't as visually disruptive as it might have been.
Up above, there is plenty of action in the sky, with a lot of local contrasts of both brightness and colour variations in the mid range. The brightest areas in the clouds are blander, and cruder in rendering, appearing to approach posterisation in a few areas in the top right quadrant. The darkest area of the sky is at the top where it is unobtrusive and acts somewhat as a framing element.
I very much like the way the Sun is handled, with the Sun and its reflection in the water subtly visible within a wider bright area which in turn merges nicely into the surroundings.
The colours initially struck me as rather odd, with an overall pinkish tint that seems very unnatural. But as I looked at the image more I began to see it more like monochrome, and the particular hue took on less and less significance.
Micro-details/edges look slightly soft, for example the trees and the top of the cliff and the pebbled area of the beach.
Overall for me this is an image which has a strong initial impact; I see big sky full of interesting clouds with a setting Sun throwing its rays across the land. And an image that rewards longer examination and contemplation because of the subtle variations in the clouds and the details made visible below.
Graham – overbez
Graham took a similar overall approach to David, with land, sky, sun and water all playing their part. I much prefer the colours of the clouds, water and sky, especially in the right hand third of the image, where I particularly like the blueness that has come into the sky.
As with David's version, and in the same places, there is a tendency towards posterisation in a couple of areas of bright cloud in the top right quadrant, although there is a bit less of this than in David's version, partly because the crop has taken out a small one these areas at the top of the image, and partly because there is some texture overlying one of the other areas.
The land is less visible than in David's version and the cliffs in particular look rather grey. The land area of the image also looks distinctly soft, which is particularly evident with the trees on the top of the cliff. The relative darkness and softness mean that for me the land area lacks the punch it has in David's version. It does have the minor advantage that the sewage outfall is less visible.
The crop has taken a significant amount from the sky. Compositionally this is coupled with the effect of uncorrected barrel distortion which curves the beach upwards on the left hand side. As a result the cliff and beach area take up a much larger proportion of the image, which is unfortunate as they, to my eye, they are rather unprepossessing in their lack of definition. The overall effect of the top crop and increased land size is to reduce the impact of the sky compared to the “big sky” effect I get from David's version.
Of less significance to my eye, the barrel distortion also causes the (actually straight) waterline to curve, which is particularly noticeable in its upward curve on the right hand side of the image.
The sun has a relatively well defined, narrowish bright yellow halo. It is very much a taste thing, but FWIW I'm not too keen on this look.
Phil-D
This is a heavy crop which throws the emphasis on to the sun, water and lower cloud layer. The strong contrast between these areas and the dark framing of the silhouetted beach and cliff at the bottom and the dark cloud layer at the top give this a strong initial impact.
However, I think the crop has taken a big toll; the image is lacking in detail and local contrast. I don't think it holds up well to closer examination, even at the 1100 pixel high level I was looking at it. And for me at least it doesn't reward a more extended examination where my eye can rove over it and find new details and/or nuances of colour, texture or light.
As I type this I'm looking at a smaller version in a word processing document. My eye goes to the sun and doesn't move around much. It is quite calming to rest my eye on. Hmmmm... Perhaps this is an image for contemplation rather than examination, best viewed from a distance and not pored over for details. Yes, I like it more now.
Rhodese
Here I see clouds, water and light. The water, with its golden sheen, seems to contribute more to the image than in the other versions. There is plenty going on in the sky, although with less detail than David and Graham rendered. The highlights in the sky are nicely done, with smoothly graded textures avoiding any hint of posterisation. The Sun has gone completely, which works for me.
The downward pointing beams of light from the Sun transect a circle of light that I like the look of, and that is only hinted at in (some) other versions, and this is mirrored by the circles of the added lens effects. However, the additions make for an overall somewhat muddled appearance to my eye, especially as 6 of the 10 or so additional circles are so perfectly complete, and so sharp edged. I don't know enough about how these things work to know if this is actually realistic or not, but to me those sharp circles seem to sit, visually, a little uncomfortably with the soft circle around the Sun. More importantly though, my eyes don't know where to look and flick back and forth between the strong “design” element of the sharp circles and the Sun's light and the way it is illuminating the sky that has been rendered so well. I can't see the sky properly because those circles are in the way, but the sky is too interesting to let the circles take centre stage. On balance the extra effects seem like a distraction to me.
Given that this is so much about the play of light in the sky, on the water and through the lens, the darkness of the foreground doesn't really trouble me – it has enough showing through the darkness to prevent it being a solid black mass, which I think would have been overwhelming. That said, the left hand area where the cliff is, above the glittering pebbled area is very dark indeed and pretty much featureless, rather too dark and featureless for my taste.
I think I see a halo around the trees which are in front of the clouds at the bottom of the slope down to the water; not too keen on that. I think I see one small lens flare circle near the bottom edge, middle left, but in the context of the much stronger flare effects that doesn't seem out of place.
As with Graham's version, I think barrel distortion and a crop along the top have increased the proportion of the image taken up with less interesting content.
Jim – FarmerJim
Another version with very muted colours, approaching a duotone of pinky-brown and greyey-blue. That's fine by me. The sky has plenty going on, with some nice swirly edge detail along the nearer line of white edged clouds, the contrast between the nearer pinky-brown clouds and the further, lower grey band of clouds, and smaller-scale contrasts within those two bands, and then a band of grey-blue sky over a low cloud bank on the horizon. That all works nicely for me.
The fan of lower, double rays from the Sun are mirrored nicely by a fan of single rays going up. The mild wideish, yellowy area around the sun is of low enough intensity not to be troublesome to my eye.
And then the bottom left. Hmmm..... It looks like it has a misty haze over it, perhaps with some green in it in large patches over on the left, and the horse looking like it might be jumping up from a patch of hot coals beneath its hooves. And greyness looks inconsistent in that there are three trees at the top left of the slope which look pretty much black, and detailed, as compared to the grey trees further down the slope, and another grey one just to the left of the top black tree at the top of the slope by the house. In this version too, I think barrel distortion and a crop along the top have increased the proportion of the image taken up with less interesting content. And I think I see a halo along a lot of the tree line too.
I'm afraid the horse doesn't rescue that area for me, especially as the horse has a dark area beneath it that my eye can too easily interpret as a mis-shaped shadow, being cast by light coming from the wrong direction.
After I had finished writing up my observations my wife looked through and commented on everyone's versions. She loved this version and thought the horse was brilliant. “This is the land of imagination,” she said. “The image is unashamedly 'cooked'. It could be the cover of a science fiction book.” And she picked up something fascinating on the visual front. She pointed out how the swirling white clouds resonated with the horse's flowing mane. And then when I looked I saw that the left hand of the two white cloud areas has a somewhat “leaping horse” shape to it, in the same orientation as the horse and mirroring it. How pedestrian she makes me feel. Her comments made me see and appreciate this version in a completely different way.
Dr Ozone, Dr_O
A nice big sky with lots going on in terms of colours and contrasts, with no hint of posterisation in the troublesome light areas in the upper right quadrant. The sky is spoiled a bit for me by the noise (this is the only version for which the noise rose above my comfort level) and by a lighter area above the bottom half of the tree line on the cliff that doesn't look quite right to my eye. I can see that there is a gently S-shaped band of a similar colour reaching over to the blue sky area on the right, which gives the lightness above the trees a degree of fit and connection with the rest of the image, but it still looks slightly out of place to me. The relatively large area of plain white with no hint of the outline of the Sun also sits a bit uncomfortably in the view for me, grabbing my attention but not really giving me much back.
The trees on the cliff are well defined and there is enough content in the dark area to stop it being over-heavy to my eye. The sewage outfall pipe is there, but very unobtrusive. There is a single lens flare near the middle bottom edge of the image, and in the context of there being no others I find it a bit distracting.
And so....
My winner?
David. Runner up, tricky. After lots more looking, and thinking about my wife's comments. Jim.
Well done David; over to you Sir.