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Hi Terran,
Yours is another that I seem to have missed commenting on until now.
Firstly, well done for continuing with this when you have other issues to deal with I'm not sure I would have done the same.
Mechanical is brilliant. Really clean and crisp. Nice angle, nice lighting. I wish my car was that clean but there is no way I am spending that long detailing it
Bumblebee is really good as well. You seem to be getting to grips with photoshop really well. Good lighting and clean bright image
I'm not sure about the chemistry shot. I have nothing against the HDR, infact I quite like the use of it on the right shot. I can understand what you were trying to achieve with the nuclear plant but to me it doesn't jump out at me what i am looking at. Perhaps getting closer and losing some of the foreground may have emphasised it more? I have seen a few shots of gas plants, etc at night and they look spectacular. Not sure if the nuclear plant looks as good at night but that may have been another option. The sky is nice and dramatic ( I always seem to be taking pictures when the sky is grey and lifeless) but the plant just seems to be a collection of buildings on the horizon.
I suppose I'm not going to be very popular but I don't really like candid either, sorry :shake:
It seems a little posed to be candid. as already said the onboard flash does you no favours. It is too harsh and you have lost a lot of detail in the hair. To be fair I think that this is a theme that many of us struggled with. I know it wasn't one of my favourites.
I have just read through what I have typed and realise it may sound a little harsh. It's not meant to be but without comments on our shots we won't move forward as photographers and that is what this challenge is all about isn't it ?
Andy
Yours is another that I seem to have missed commenting on until now.
Firstly, well done for continuing with this when you have other issues to deal with I'm not sure I would have done the same.
Mechanical is brilliant. Really clean and crisp. Nice angle, nice lighting. I wish my car was that clean but there is no way I am spending that long detailing it
Bumblebee is really good as well. You seem to be getting to grips with photoshop really well. Good lighting and clean bright image
I'm not sure about the chemistry shot. I have nothing against the HDR, infact I quite like the use of it on the right shot. I can understand what you were trying to achieve with the nuclear plant but to me it doesn't jump out at me what i am looking at. Perhaps getting closer and losing some of the foreground may have emphasised it more? I have seen a few shots of gas plants, etc at night and they look spectacular. Not sure if the nuclear plant looks as good at night but that may have been another option. The sky is nice and dramatic ( I always seem to be taking pictures when the sky is grey and lifeless) but the plant just seems to be a collection of buildings on the horizon.
I suppose I'm not going to be very popular but I don't really like candid either, sorry :shake:
It seems a little posed to be candid. as already said the onboard flash does you no favours. It is too harsh and you have lost a lot of detail in the hair. To be fair I think that this is a theme that many of us struggled with. I know it wasn't one of my favourites.
I have just read through what I have typed and realise it may sound a little harsh. It's not meant to be but without comments on our shots we won't move forward as photographers and that is what this challenge is all about isn't it ?
Andy