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  1. kendo1

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    On the £275 pledge: change frmo to from :)

    On the £350: no apostophe is used with 'its'


    Another edit :)

    No full stop is required at the end of a bullet point - you have sometimes placed one, sometimes not.

    Under 'Camera testing in the real world' you've used its' again, and in the paragraph under the picture of 'closed Chroma'
     
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    The page is looking good, Steve.
     
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    Thanks Ken. Really good feedback and spots with the typos! I was typing it up while working at the same time so thanks for seeing them :0)
     
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    You forgot to say that the Chroma will make you more attractive to the opposite sex and the envy of all your friends.
     
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    Oh man, I knew there was something I’d missed out!
     
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    bugger! i dont shoot LF and have no intension starting-but i still want one:exit::(:confused::D
     
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    Ah but this is the F&C section where actual intentions and reality are regularly ignored...it's so shiny and looks awesome on any shelf...
     
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    you can go off people you know:mad::p
     
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    If you’d like some further comments on the KS website,

    There’s a space before ‘Large’ at the beginning of the second paragraph in “What is a technical field camera”

    The bullets under “Technical specifications” have too many line breaks and so are too far apart, and the first one has funny spacing at the end of he line. (It looks like you’ve typed this in Word or similar and copy/pasted.)

    And a personal point about the KS offers, only the Earlybird states that you get a ‘Chroma 4x5 technical field camera’ - my feeling is that they all should!

    Good luck!

    edit - another thought - how about a kaleidoscope or rainbow version as a very special option limited edition?
     
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    Thanks for taking the time to read through it. The line breaks/spacing are a result of the KS site (although I hate Word too!) so I'll see if I can correct them.

    Good point about the rewards not stating you will actually get a camera....you caught me out!

    I hasn't considered a kaleidoscope version before, maybe I'll take a look :0)
     
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    Hey there's a link to me! :D One question - what kind of pink is the pink option? A Barbie-kind-of pink, or more a hot pink?

    Looks like I'll be opting for the regular £250 version too - although I'd love the engraved version, I think the girlfriend would actually kill me. Stone dead.
     
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    This is the pink;

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    Obviously it's hard to know exactly on screen and I haven't bought any pink sheets before to know in real life!

    As for the reward, I'm happy to engrave your camera with whatever text you want on it. It's the least I can do in return for the support you've given me :0)
     
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    @stevelmx5 Aw Steve, that's so nice of you :) I'll definitely take you up on that! Also, that pink is great - I'd rather a more magenta-pink than a flamingo-pink!
     
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    No problem. I’m also happy to engrave camera’s for any other TP F&C members that support me. This is the best place online after all ;0)
     
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    Me too
    And there’s really no point in trying to convince me, I have 3 unused film cameras already, and several unused digital ones too.
     
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    I’ve updated the design to incorporate stronger hinges and also made the rear standard smaller.

    chromamk2open.jpg

    chromamk2folded.jpg

    The widest point is now 175mm and when folded it will be around 100mm deep.
     
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    Hi Steve,

    I'm a regular listener to The Film Photography Project Podcast and they regularly mention Kickstarter Projects and Large Format, it might be worthwhile posting on their page for some extra exposure for your project to try to get a mention;
    https://www.facebook.com/FilmPhotographyPodcast

    Good luck, it looks like an interesting project.

    Cheers,

    Jason
     
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    Thanks for the tip Jason. I'll drop them an email today :plus1:
     
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