Hi Dawn,
Finally got around to dropping in - and an absolutely fantastic start
Great idea for week 1, and I'm torn between the 2 edits.
I prefer the first one for the composition, the natural position of the glasses and the way that it fills the frame.
However, the second one has "accommodation" in better focus and I love the warm tones in it. In comparison to this version, the first edit feels a little cold, and the correct WB version seems to be lacking something.
But don't worry I'm not going to suggest that you do another reshoot to get the best of both worlds
That is an absolutely fantastic dress in the second image.
Just beautiful.
Love the concept behind this, love the PP and it's a brilliant use of the room divider.
As Dave suggested I would have been tempted to tape off the back of the screen to remove those 2 strips of light, but that's not a huge problem.
I'm also wondering of there was any way that you could have raised the hat a little higher so that it was in more of a natural head position? Again, only a little niggle but I think it would have added a little extra something to it.
I'm intrigued to see what you have planned for week 3.