agree with allan.... could be a really cool shot, just needs to have the shaft more visible.. and that the tip is not OOF
Awesome timing catching this midflight too...
Hi Alan
Nice low key image, nicely lit, but maybe the shaft of the dart could use a little light.
having had a look at it large i think the tip isn't out of focus as such,
with it being chrome the light reflecting off it is the cause.
did you try any other angles of it?
Hi Alan
Sooooory yet another I am behind on !!!
Food - I agree that the spacing and alignment needs a bit of work, Nice colours and good to see you thought about the different label styles... good even background
2 - Now that tomato is a cracker, definitely looks good enough to eat, great colour, lighting and background - no crit from me
Art - I think the ties on your hoodie need a little of attention, other than that super blacks, liking the halo around your head and the catchlights in your eyes... a damn good effort I think
Friendship - Awwweeeee
Good focus on the eyes, a pleasing crop, again great catchlights, also liking the shine caught on the nose - a lovely pic
Sleek - Minimal crit as per Allan and Graham, liking your idea and the B&W
HI Alan
Nothing wrong with that really good star bursts (if thats the right word)
quite a striking image, works well
Slow down just commented on the first one which I have to say is better to my eyes
2nd one you have done some different processing I take it.
I feel like shoving light where the sun doesn't shine - if that were possible!
You'd probably need some sort of a reflector for that I think!
Think yourself luck you;re up-to-date, and not under any pressure to post. Sit back for a few days... but don;t give up mate!
I like the first for colour, the number of starbursts makes it much more interesting. Plenty colour there too.
Cheers Graham.
Just got a tad frustrated at my inability to control coloured light onto a glass of water. Arghhhhhhhhh!
The writing looks a little out of focus (it could be my eyes) other than that a decent enough shot for a fairly difficult theme.
Hi Alan, looks good - think that a flash is pretty high on my want list too... opens up many more doors creatively.. But I really want to have the confidence in the camera first, before throwing something else into the mix.
Passable shot too, clear, sharp, good contrast.
Hi Alan
sleek - all has been said on technique - just my view that it is an outstanding idea
Colour - I don't know why you are complaining #1 is spot on for the theme , very graphic and very colourful. Good crop
Fantasy - see where you are coming from and so a good choice. Looks clear to me too. Maybe it is because the two 'o's in Yongnuo are etched on the case in a different pattern to the other letters that it gives an impression of oof
That really made me laugh. You want confidence in your camera!! With the stunning images you produce..... Holey Moley!