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Live - Swans are difficult birds to shoot right because of the whites and then the black part between beak and head plus they are usually on darkish water. You've done really well with both of these. You can still see detail in both so well done. To get these so close up was a bonus for you. Out of the two I prefer the wider #1 shot.
First #1 - Not sure this is one of your strongest which maybe is down to the subject. The vignette top right has been mentioned. I'm wondering whether a really gritty and noisy/grainy B&W conversion may have accentuated the dishevelled old pub.
First #3 - I feel is far stronger in composition but would benefit from cropping the blown cloud. Also you've left a couple of dodgy edits on the A.
Smooth - #2 for me. It has a nice shallow DOF but enough to pick out the coarseness of the sandpaper and the grain of the wood. Exposure looks good as well.
Attached - Looks like one of those pattern pictures. The DoF again works with this one and therefore my eye goes straight to the centre piece of the umbrella which has been positioned nicely just off centre
Energy - I like all three of these but if pushed will say #3. The shine on the tower and blades has been nicely picked out. You can even see the reflection of the blue sky and clouds in it. Super shot.
Round - This wouldn't be your Christmas tree would it?. Nice image but maybe missing something as a main focal point if you know what I mean.
Nonsense. This made me chuckle. You obviously live in a posh area if you get Mrs DK to do the hovering outside LOL. The lack of leaves in the wake of the Dyson makes it look like she;s quite practised at it. Could you send her round please.
First #1 - Not sure this is one of your strongest which maybe is down to the subject. The vignette top right has been mentioned. I'm wondering whether a really gritty and noisy/grainy B&W conversion may have accentuated the dishevelled old pub.
First #3 - I feel is far stronger in composition but would benefit from cropping the blown cloud. Also you've left a couple of dodgy edits on the A.
Smooth - #2 for me. It has a nice shallow DOF but enough to pick out the coarseness of the sandpaper and the grain of the wood. Exposure looks good as well.
Attached - Looks like one of those pattern pictures. The DoF again works with this one and therefore my eye goes straight to the centre piece of the umbrella which has been positioned nicely just off centre
Energy - I like all three of these but if pushed will say #3. The shine on the tower and blades has been nicely picked out. You can even see the reflection of the blue sky and clouds in it. Super shot.
Round - This wouldn't be your Christmas tree would it?. Nice image but maybe missing something as a main focal point if you know what I mean.
Nonsense. This made me chuckle. You obviously live in a posh area if you get Mrs DK to do the hovering outside LOL. The lack of leaves in the wake of the Dyson makes it look like she;s quite practised at it. Could you send her round please.