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Shine On Harvest Moon
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Vertical - lovely images for the theme, if I was to choose a fav I would go for the last image with the planters.
Yum - good take on the theme, nice clean composition nicely lit good work.
Thanks Mandy
Hi Iain
Vertical
#1 - excellent perspective and i do like the steely colours set against the muted green of the tree. Very sharp, which must have been difficult taking account as to how you are holding the camera
#2 - does nothing for me, altho I think that i understand what you were trying to achieve.
#3 - another super shot. Like the comp and the crop. Again nice handling of the colours with neutral tones offset by the punchy green. Agree with others about the pavement, not because of the comp but the messy lines in it.
Yum
Creative, humorous and very much on theme. Well lit and good attention to detail Very minor crit would be that it looks a touch bright on my screen and i would like to have seen the blocks arranged in such a way that I could not see the words - however i don't know that game and there may be a connection that i am missing.
Thanks Alan
My thinking on yum, the game is Jenga, it's a stacking blocks game. The reference is to those chunky chips you can get at some pubs/restaurants, they look like Jenga blocks (well to me they do) but I may have missed the mark with it as it needs explaining
Well up to usual standard, agree with all other points bar any part being too bright, looks fine to me.
How about having the chips a bit farther left, leaving room for a nice shiny dollop of tomato ketchup, yum.
Thanks Graham
I must admit, it doesn't look too bright to me either but monitors etc differ.