I really like you LIGHT image, great colour, DOF and concept, well done
Project: this is a tough one, this is a good take on the subject matter
I'm jealous. I don't even have a shed let alone bits to have in one
It's a nice idea and cleanly taken but possibly a little cluttered having the three objects there. I'd be tempted to lose one, but having said that I really like it![]()
good image for a difficult theme. Well lit too.
That's a really good take on the theme, Paul. I am glad I am doing my own theme because I could not have come up with any ideas for this week.
Jenny
Probably the most literal interpretation I've seen this week, but it definitely works.
Nice clean, crisp image and I actually like the balance given to it by having 3 objects on display. I think that the drawing of the bracket top left is maybe a step too far though and it seems a bit out of place with the rest of the drawing. Not a major problem, but I think it might have benefited from a bit more open space in that area.
It works, it's very clear, and fits perfectly. The simplicity is great, and the balance of the three works really well.
despite what you call a lack of inspiration its a nicely executed shot, well lit and on theme. The only thing i could add would be to try a slightly different composition to incorporate the make and speed of the film.
I think you're being too harsh on yourself Paul, I think this is a strong image. I like the composition you have used, it fills the frame, the lighting is good, it works. Iain
I know what you mean about inspiration or lack there of ! However I like this - it certainly fits the theme and I like the lighting.
It works for me Paul, in fact, it's better than my take on the same thing... nicely done.
I was dying to find some old film but then realised the last time I used any I was about 7
I like the lighting on this a lot Paul. It's a strong and contrasty image and that appeals to me. Not quite so sure about the angle, but it's definitely not a shot to be disappointed with.
Hi Paul, I also like this one, especially the lighting and the composition.
Jenny
Project: I like this, Paul - and think the drawing and the objects work well together. I'm trying to work out what you'd make from the drawing - it looks very technical to me.
Film: The lighting works really well on this - especially the top edge of the film. Looking at the kinks at the end of the leader makes me think you've had this for a while. It would be interesting to see the results of actually using it.The composition works well, too and the eye naturally follows the film round the frame.
Jean
I racked my brains this week to find an interesting composition for a roll of film . . . and you've cracked it
Love the angle and the way that the curl of film leads you around the frame.
It may be the obvious subject choice, but you've really done it justice.
Sorry Paul - I somehow fell behind with your thread.
Surfaces: brilliant conception and beautifully done - just perfect. One for the wall, I think.
Light: another cracker and not at all obvious to the rest of us! The contrast in colour has come out really well and I love the semi-abstract feel to this.
Project: a very nice clean feel to this that reminds me of illustrations in catalogues or "how-to" books of the 1950s. I prefer the three objects - I don't think two would balance so well.
Film: may be an obvious shot but I like the angled composition. I'm just a little bothered by the pale streak beside the left edge of the canister - can you blend it in a bit better?