weekly Sasaki's Photo52 Challenge 2013: Week 1 Sin

[Sasaki]

This is my personal thread for the "Photo52 Challenge 2013", first try. Let's see how it goes... I'm already enjoying seeing the creativity from other threads.
Would particularly welcome comments on how I can improve my shots and/or developing the ideas further.

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[Tango32]

ahh ok found it



Im also new to this but here goes.... I would have tried to get more detail into the cork and blurred the grass so the cork was the only thing that catched the attention if that makes sense

welcome to TP and the 52's look forward to seeing the next 51

 

[Sasaki]

1-Sin by trolbyx, on Flickr

Photo taken on 5 Jan, a cold day in the park, looking for some inspiration for Week 1.

What's the sin - littering, drinking in a public space outdoors, or that there's no more [booze] left and the party's over? I particularly liked the contrast of the cork against the vivid green.

 

[Sasaki]

ahh ok found it



Im also new to this but here goes.... I would have tried to get more detail into the cork and blurred the grass so the cork was the only thing that catched the attention if that makes sense

welcome to TP and the 52's look forward to seeing the next 51

Ah, you beat me to it! I was busy setting up the Flickr account just for this then figuring out how to link the photo over. Next time won't take me so long, haha.

Thanks Craig for your feedback, I'll have to play around with the settings and practice more... and yes, your suggestion definitely makes sense - will learn how to do that!

 

[Donnie]

I like it, great dof and the contrast is great between the greens and the cork

 

[blakester]

Great start to your 52 Sarah,
A simple yet effective take on the theme, particularly like the vivid colour tones. Compositionally good too, the cork placed on the upper left third works well against the negative space feel to the right of the frame.

Dof could be a little shallower as Craig mentioned above but apart from that, good start. Iain

 

[mich66]

like your composition and the nice vivid green grass.. great start!

 

[blondie606]

Hi Sarah & a belated welcome to the 52's from me

Like it...great contrast in the colors , nicely sharp . fab start to your project....look forward to seeing more of your work

 

[posiview]

'ello, Sarah, cracking start. Didn't scream Sin, but quite a subtle interpretation. Clean, simple and well composed.

Welcome aboard

 

[Cheesy feet]

Very nice, simple, but the shallow dof makes it work.

 

[Dark Knight]

The composition and DOF do it for me with this shot... Nice One Sarah

 

[Allan.H]

nice pp cork really stands out

 

[Kerioak]

Nice sharp image and lovely colours - can you still see the grass though ?

 

[sworks]

Love the depth of field and how sharp the image is

 

[Dark Knight]