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Great take on Season, love the DOF on this
Thanks, it does look rather rubbish.
I'll try a reshoot of it with the advice.
That's quite the improvement, much improved.
Hi Mark
great improvement for gravity...here's a thougt....rotate it right 90 degree's & the liquid would be defying gravity by not coming out of the glass...or even turn it upside down ...I know i know...some people are never satisfied
Season edit...much beter being a bit lighter, good focus on the writing
Loads better Mark, defiantly a step on the right direction.
I would maybe not have cropped so close, but much better than the one before.
Good work on the edits Mark, it is very refreshing to see.
Taking on board the comments and returning with your images nailed, thats what makes this such a great challenge.
Nothing more to add critique-wise but just to add Iain
great edit!
Like it, especially the lines of the reeds.
Looks like you've just missed focus.
Cheers.
Great idea Mark and bang on theme.
I like that Mark, focus not perfect but the overall look of the shot is really nice
Hi Mark. A nice shot, would have applied a crop to focus more on the bird, however nice colourings and well in theme.
Nice image the reeds look fantastic i like the way they dominate the image
Gree with the previous comments but it's got great lines and loving the light!
like the colour tones and lines from the reeds.. nice take on the theme
Gravity: Your second shot is many times better than the first, little tight in the frame for my preferences but nice and sharp.
Wild: Nice shot, my first thought that it was a Reed Bunting in Reeds so you were doubling up on the Reed bit but hopefully one of the bird experts in the forum will confirm
Like it, Mark, the inclusion of the FG works well too. Nice low angle as well.
Crit, well I'd like a slight crop off the right, there is a gap on the right of the right vertical, IYSWIM.
Cheers.
Nice idea on the space one. I agree with cropping a little off the right though.
Good job on work, too. Not sure what the strings are hanging from the man, they're the only bits that really distract for me.