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The edit looks much better in my opinion.
The edit looks much better in my opinion.
Cool... Cheers GuysMe too. I think the crop works better.
I found it blooming hard panning too.
Thanks very much IainAnother vote for the re-crop Dean
It has a real sense of speed and movement in it, the bright red set against the dark green is very effective too.
Good skills on the panning also
I wish there was more mateYup, crop works better...more in front for me, though.
Cheers TooDecent panning skills, as well.
Cheers.
Thanks AlanHi DK
Speed - simply put, it works. It conveys the theme and there is enough stillness in the centre around Mrs DK that the remaining blur gives the effect. Good colours and the white line going up slightly also adds to the impact.
Cheers Nick I sure agree it is tough, I'm hoping to try again in some different locations to try and improve and get the knackThe crop of speed works for me. I find panning tough, and always end up pushing the shutter speed up. You've not done that, and it's given it a nice sense of speed. The red against the green pops nicely too.
Many Thanks LisaPlenty: Very nice shot. Lovely dappled light.
Reshoot gravity: Again a great capture, nice and sharp!
Speed: I like the crop you have done, nice panning.
Hey LynneHi Dean.....I finally back again for a catch up
Sounds like a plan... but I doubt it will last that long in my housePlenty...edit is better for sure....make certain to save some plum crumble to bring to the meet
That they are... Thanksgravity.....crop of the reshoot works a treat.....well done you for chasing them round....quick little beggars aren't they
Thanks againSpeed....great choice of car color ...red really stands out against the green hedge....crop works better, cracking sense of speed in the wheels...good stuff mister
Struggling with this weeks to get one done on the weekend, my son and I went for a walk today to get the following shot... I didn't manage the shot I really wanted so I think I will try and get another during the week 'If I can' as this is pushing it
Wk 30 - 'Step' A step in the river...
Wk 20 - 'Step' by TP DK, on Flickr
On theme, I think. I find the light OOF wall on the right hand side distracting from the main subject though.
Yeah thanks Allanit needs you to take a couple of steps to the left
Thanks MichaelHi Dean, sorry I have missed loads!
Speed, I would crop from the right side of the first pale streak on the left if that makes sense.Nice movement and the colours are great.
Step, shame about that oof bit of wall, but nice movement in the water keeps me looking though.
Really... Woo HooThat looks better to me.
That's fair enough GrahamStep. Tbh I didn't think much of the original
Another Woo Hooo, to be honest I really was unsure if I had gone overboard with itbut the miniature effect really makes it stand out.
Thanks... again I didn't even notice until it was pointed outSpeed...again the second with the crop to give more space ahead than behind makes a huge difference. Bright red works really well against the greens.
It sure is frustrating mate, and I'm all for taking crit on-board, but still beat myself up over not noticing myselfFrustrating when it takes two goes to nail it but but all credit that you're able to take crit on board and make the small changes that make a big difference
Thanks Ian, comparing the two together yeah the first is very 'Snapish' although getting a longish exposure steady with no tripod, ND filter Etc. was a challenge for me with my shaky handsAnother vote for the tilt shift edit Dean
I think it takes it away from a straightforward record shot and elevates it to something rather good.
Well... I'd like to say I went out and done a re-shootWas this a reshoot or some photoshop wizardry?
Cheers NickI like the tilt-shift version a lot, has an unreal quality about it. Smart idea, it really gave it something.
Thanks BrianI'm another who MUCH prefers the tilt shift.
That sounds typical... I'm amazed we have any flowing water considering how flat it is around hereI'm also quite jealous because we have a big series of these near us that I wanted to shoot but they are dry at the moment
Well done.
So much better, though i still think you should have got in the water
Cheers Blu !!!!Yup, edit for me. Initial was a bit too busy for me and the edits removed some of the that.
Cheers.
Cheers Alan - I haven't a clue what tilt-shift stands for eitherHi DK
Another vote for the edit of Steps - as has been said it does take it out of the ordinary and I am a real fan of the miniature (Tilt shift - altho I don't know what that means ) effect. It really is quite a nice shot - the water sems to have more movement in it.
Thanks JohnI really like the speed shot - great pan and although I wasn't sure initially about step the redo which draws focus is greatly improved
Thanks LisaStep(s): I really like the movement in the water. I really like the edited version too!