Hiya James,
Really like the 'promise' photos great DOF in the first and nice focus on promise in the 2nd (only nit-pick with the 2nd is that is looks a bit skew).
Well done
Cheers
Dawn
Hi, James, well done for a nice, simple idea that works well..
Is the paper flat or curved upwards?
Both are a tad off centre.
Cheers.
James I like your idea and this song
You should have shot it upside down, that's how I always see set lists I like the dof and the presentation suits the stark nature of the image IMO
Hi James,
I like both of them and the dof is spot on for the theme.
Great shot No2
A nice balance, with the field of focus on the bottom third of shot, and a nice soft gentle blur above and below it.
I think that works better for me, than shot one, where the field of focus at the top, unbalances the shot a little.
Great
Adie
As above stated second one is more pleasing i find my self not begin botherd about the other text in the image and being drawn to the promise text sio it does what you wanted it to great to get the paper white instread of yellow as well
Thanks Dawn, I alway struggle with getting things level even if i use the guides in PSE9, any tips?
Hi James
love your Twisted shot....great color & DOF & spot on the theme
Hi James, love the corkscrew. really like how vivid the orange is, great focusing and lighting. Whats the new flash you have got?
Good shot hadn't thought of that one even though I'm well aquainted to them !!! I like the angle and crop you have used
Now that I like! Perfect for the theme. Excellent detail where it's needed and great use of DOF.
Yes it looks even better in the large size - really powerful.
Not hugely keen on the orange colour, but that's a minor point.
Good shot
Patrick
Good composition and use of colour, I lso like the dof
Hiya James
First, to answer your question ... I often use the top of the 'Task Bar' at the bottom of my screen as a guide to getting horizontals level, which seems to work as a good guide for me.
Onto your photo for twisted .... I really like this one. Orange is one of my favourite colours so that gets a from me.
Great detail in the metal at the fore, and good control of lighting. The angle and DOF work well. The background/base compliments the orange too.
Well done
Cheers
Dawn
Hi, James most has already been said but I especially llike the orange and composition.
Think I'd like to see all the actual screw threads in focus.
Cheers.
You've made good use of the new flash Lighting looks very good.
Knew someone was gonna post one... just tried my attempt too. Yours looks spot on the angle and brightness works really well. Also like the lines in the blades.
Hi James,
I'm not so keen on week 20, not sure why, something about the text in #1 isn't right - did you curve the paper? The DOF is good in both though.
Week 21 I like, nice detail on the tread.
Clever
..........well spotted.
Hiya James,
That is absolutely fantastic .... very clever indeed. Where on earth did you take this photo?
Cheers
Dawn
wow that was amazing i started to talk to my self espically when peolpe satted to comment on it i thought i was going nut fantastic idea that in my top 3 for theme cant relly say on shot as i haven't seen it and don't really want to as it will spoil it for me
Which head do I wear to view this? My geologists head or my photographers head? mmm
ah well, it doesn't matter, great shot from either perspective.
The only niggle is the sky is blown, which is a shame, but when there is great sediment strata on display, who looks at the sky LOL
Adie
Gotta love it....walking around thinking "Hidden, hidden, I need a hidden photograph......wwweeeyyyyhheeeeyyyy, I've found one!....
If you tell me there was no manipulation before, during or after the photograph was taken I'll be very impressed.
Hi, nice idea and you've done a decent job. Looks a bit dark on my work's PC. Also I've have got a bit closer - can you crop and retain detail?
Might have been an idea to buy some dar card and drop the bulb onto that to possible show more contrast?
Background is a bit busy.
Cheers.
As Andy has said you have done well to capture the breaking of the bulb but we can't appreciate the detail of it from the distance. A close crop may work with the image you already have though.