That's a interesting take on the theme, welcome to the mad house I look forward to following your progress.
Like the idea, would make a great abstract. My bit of crit would be that I think the focus is off for what u were trying to shoot and the line seems to be blown in places.
I also like the idea but am struggling with the focus, if you hadn't said washing line I would have thought the lines were electronic
Hi Sharon....welcome to nutty corner
Now , that's a bit different to the bike shots , reminds me of a spooky film...White Noise I think ...very abstract
Look forward to seeing your project...maybe you can shoehorn a bike in somewhere one week
Works for the theme. I think the PLAY looks a bit faded or OOF maybe. I feel it needs a little more punch to bring it out.
Works for the theme. I think the PLAY looks a bit faded or OOF maybe. I feel it needs a little more punch to bring it out.
This. Nowt wrong with a literal approach and I quite like the splash of colour at the top.
Cheers.
Definitely says play but it feels a little too close up.
Play looks a little out of focus and the white at the bottom is a bit of a distraction.
Nice literal take on the theme.
Fitting for the theme but if does seem to be very soft looking.
Fits the theme - not keen on the bottom half of the shot though
Really like your lines, it may well be an out of focus washing line, but it glows like neon lights. ACE!
Thanks for your comments Graham
For play though.... I do like the sparkly colour at the top, but as the other comments re the rest of it. Is this a heavy crop from the original??
Nice and simple, Good take on the theme.
On theme shot, perhaps could be a bit sharper?
Hiya Play on theme but a tad boring maybe?