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Like it. Nicely composed and liking the lighting.
Like it. Nicely composed and liking the lighting.
Hi Lee
Sorry a bit behind on comments, so quick catch up from me...
Metal - A very simple image that works soooooo well, love the light and pattern of perforations , nice one
Captive - Shame the DoF just not deep enough for me, but liking the idea a lot, and the nice strong blacks and whites are nice and crisp
Miniature - I wasn't sure where you were going with this until I read your description, a nice dark background again and nicely caught eyes, your mini me sure looks engrossed in the TV
HiHi Lee, I was about to type out longer crit when I scrolled further down and found that DK had pretty much said what I was going to!
Miniature is a nice capture - very natural. I tend to default to pushing the exposure quite high on kids as they have such good skin (non greasy) they can cope with it and it tends to be quite flattering. I think for single on-axis flash you've done very well as that's bloomin' hard lighting to get to work. Not sure if you have a bounce flash, but if you do, firing it off the walls/ceiling might help to give even more shape to the image? (Sorry if I'm teaching you to suck eggs!)
Great start...
Hi Lee, I love the aspect of this shot ...with the dark sky it looks very foreboding ...I was going to say I think it's maybe a bit too dark, but on the Flickr link it looks just right....excellent choice.
Hi Lee
Some good stuff posted so far. I particularly like the Miniature shot, nice detail & lighting. Did you rotate it? If so, what a great idea.
Abandoned ... dark, dramatic ... but seems to be lacking fine detail. So I looked on Flickr, better when zoomed.
I can't check the detail on Abandoned because I'm posting from my phone but it doesn't matter anyway, it's a great, moody shot of a brilliantly spooky building.
Abandond
I think a little more contrast, to bring out some more detail?
But what an interesting old building
Well that's what boys are like I guess. Mine are 11 and 17 and when/if they pose for me - it will be only ONE shot strictly.Oh I know, I've got three boys 2,3 &8 and they all refuse to cooperate
I've not heard of Racton Monument but you've made it look quite impressive. Love the b&w treatment.
abandoned is a very strong image, powerful and spooky
Great find lovely angle beautiful sky just a tad more contrast on the building over all supper find.
Nice spot and a good angle which accentuates the theme for me. I too would like the shadows brought up, even if the sky were kept darker - I just want to see a touch more detail in that building... But well captured.
Good shot and nice POV but I find it a little too dark
Hi, Lee, symmetry is a little off on abandoned but the perspective really works well as does the gritty processing.
Cheers.
Can you see it?