Hi Tilz ... I'm going to disagree with dood and say I'd crop it even more and focus on the bright red of the boat, well spotted for the theme, that boat is a great colour.
Thanks for the comments and suggestions on different ways I could have cropped the shot. I can't crop it to show more water on either the side or to as the image is pretty much as I shot it. I only cropped out some sand at the bottom. I guess it's a good job I like the image as it is then . Thanks again for the input guys
I was going to suggest a crop so boat isn't so central but then I read the other comments and clearly no one can agree on the crop it's a nice photo and a good take on the theme.
£18 for the lens... Looks like you got a bargain. That looks spot on for sharpness and detail.
Good use of complimentary colours with the red and green.
Composition wise, I'm going to disagree with the lot of them and say you need to turn in through 180' so that the water is at the top
You could crop in at the bottom left giving the impression of there being more at the top and more at the left for the boat to lean into possibly to satisfy d00d, Chris, Susie & Allan, but if it's how you want it to look, then leave it alone, as you're the one who needs to be happy with it
Thanks for the comments and the suggestions Tim. What do you mean by turning it 180? Sorry I'm still learning as this . I'll have a look at cropping the bottom and left all though to see if I like how it looks
I was joking and taking the mick out of the other comments
I meant turn it upside down
If you do have a go at cropping in from the bottom left, make sure you turn on "constrain proportions" (or ratio) so that you keep the same relative dimensions.
I don't mind it as it is and think that the two clumps of green give it a nice composition. Odd numbers normally work better than evens. So your little triangle works well.
Week 45 Height and Re-Shoot
Didn't have chance to get out much this week because of the weather so had to make do with a shot I took the other week while at the seaside for height which I thought of using for colourful and one of my colourful fish for the re-shoot. Neither are anything special its just what I've got Crane by Craig Tillotson, on Flickr Swordtail 2 by Craig Tillotson, on Flickr
The tower crane works fine Tilly, not so sure on the fish with it being so central to the image, but saying that hits the theme, so my fave is the tall crane towering into the sky - 2 more boxes ticked
Thanks for the comments guys. I know what u mean about the fish shot, I took several shots but never really got one I liked. Good job they're in my living room so I can easily practice taking shots of them
Height - Liking the colours in the crane shot, the yellow works well against the blue.
You need to have a look at the verticals though. The crane is leaning and the building more so.
You're always going to get something off vertical with the perspective you're using, but the crane itself, I feel, should be upright.
Colourful - Orange and green are good contrasting colours. It's not sharp though. Still, PABD and onto the next one
Height - at least you got some blue sky, nice contrast with the crane.
Colourful - Good colours and no reflections from glass. Focus seems to be on lower leaf rather than fish, I know I've struggled with aquarium shots and focus.
Week 46 Remote
Took this one and edited on my phone as I didn't have my camera with me whilst camping at the weekend. I was surprised by the amount I could do with the software on the phone. I could have waited till I got home to process the shot but decided to use what I had at the time Remote Cabin by Craig Tillotson, on Flickr
Thanks for the comments guys. There's a few of these guys in the woods we were in, we were staying in one actually. It was a hard shot to get right as none of the trees were growing straight so getting the shot level was trickier than normal
Agree with the comments about it being a great find, and well taken with what you had available.
Nice work getting it level, plenty of detail and it sells the theme to me.
Week 47 Build
This is a shot of the parts of my R/C cars transmission after I'd done a re-build on the diff which is the part in the middle. I then had to re-build the car ready to be raced on Friday night Re-Build by Craig Tillotson, on Flickr
Good idea for the theme, I'd have been tempted to clone out the bright area at the top right (or block it out with something dark before taking the shot).
Thanks for the comment Chris and the advice about the top right corner. It would look better cloned out thanks for mentioning it. I'd been concentrating on the centre of the shot and not even noticed it, what can I say it's been a long week
I'm not sure a closer crop is needed. As you say, a little clone work to replace the bright rhs would be a simple improvement.
I thought it had the look of a gearbox when I looked at the main thread.
I like the idea but feel it is too staged with all the items spaced out, or maybe it's just me that would have stuff randomly placed and messy - as I said a real good idea for the theme and not badly lit
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