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Hi Iain
I had a quick look at this last night before I went to the pub and did not comment - but the thread hs been busy since then!!
Your usual very high standard. Beautifully and expertly crafted props which brought a smile to my face. My only minor gripe was that I did not see the connection straight away, altho I accept entirely the thinking. So then i tried to decide why, and I think that it is because the conductor does not stand out enough for me - initially I just thought that he was a musician - so perhaps my only crit would be that, in an ideal way, he should be more forward/detached/in control of the others.
Lovely dark b/g which made me think of black velvet curtains from which the star of the show is about to appear. Excellent lighting - real show biz/filmic quality.
Thanks Alan, I agree its a tenuous link to the theme and not one which is obvious. I thought about having the conductor seperate but tried different compositions which only served to put either the conductor or musicians oof.
This I felt was quite distracting, so what we have here is a compromise