weekly Neyol's 52 Week One - Linear / Line

[Neyol]

Hello all. New to this and this is my first year in the 52...... So Line....

http://www.flickr.com/photos/neyol63/11801702403/in/pool-talkphotographyphoto52


Single File by Neyol, on Flickr

 

[Pinkbikerbabe]

Hello and welcome you need to copy and paste the bbcode for the image to show up rather than a link.

 

[Neyol]

please help. i am confused. i have typed in

with no spaces and still i get nothing?
What am i doing wrong?
Thank you

hooray done it :-0

 

[Pinkbikerbabe]

Great start to your 52 and a good take on the theme.

 

[Allan.H]

Hi Nice start, the only thing I could crit is it is slightly underexposed
welcome aboard though

 

[Sonriendo]

It is a touch dark, but a really original take on the theme

 

[susiejb]

I really like this one ..... personally I like the dark effect

 

[cowboy]

Nice idea, I also like the dark effect.

 

[Tango32]

hi there nice image great take on the theme i quite like it

 

[Delta Skies]

A little more exposure might help on this one but otherwise a good take on the theme

 

[Dark Knight]

Hi Neil - welcome to the 52 and the forum

Line - Nice idea that, I like the angle they are lined up, I think it needs a dark image for the characters, but not sure if it could be a tad lighter though - Great start

 

[posiview]

Hi, Line. Yup on theme, as has been said. Looks a tad dark. Otherwise nice DOF and composition.

Cheers.

 

[Phil-D]

Good start Neil, I would have been tempted to focus on the 3rd down the line as he's peering round a little more

 

[higgeh]

I think i have to agree with phil-D with the focus on the third one. Also maybe some more characters and a tighter crop would give the impression of a longer line (i.e. not being able to see the front or back of the line?)

Otherwise spot on theme but could do with being slightly brighter.

 

[-Paul-]

Good idea! Perhaps a tad dark?

 

[siblingchris]

Not much else to say from me, but i would like to see the feet of the character at the front I think. God take on the theme and I like the darkness also

 

[Neyol]

Thank you all for your comments. I will take that all on board

 

[Neyol]

Thank you all for your comments. I will take that all on board

 

[anitacv]

Hi
Think everyone has covered everything. well done on your first theme

 

[blondie606]

Hi Neil & a belated welcome from me

Liking your line shot....the darkness suits it I think , like the layout as well maybe an even lower POV....maybe ???

 

[beckyboy1]

Like the composition on this and the dark look to it although being especially picky the 3rd one back seems to be leaning ever so slightly to the right.