I love the vivid colours, especially in the blue and red. My only improvement I can offer is to iron the mat, the none strait yellow lines steal my attention a bit. I like that the image doesn't actually say "odd", it made me have to think about the image in order to realise why it was odd. Well done, I look forward to the rest of your 52.
Good start , like the vibrant colors & low POV . ironing the mat I agree with & for me it's just a tad to busy ( but knowing nothing about the game I'm probably wrong!) Maybe a few less chips in total
Hi Tim. Nice and sharp where it counts so full marks here. I like your interpretation which shows bags of thought has gone into your piece. Overall just a bit busy in terms of colours clashing for me. I think the wavy lines make this look skewed which niggles too. Good work overall
The dark is not a problem for me, it looks like what it is, a train coming down a track in the dark, I really like the shine on the track, nice curves... fits well
I agree with dark knight, being dark is fine because that's what it would have looked like. I'd prob clone the green light out as it's a bit distracting and rotate slightly anticlockwise. Good reflections on the tracks!
Exposure is fine for me. Any lighter and I feel it would detract from the lines. Cracking idea. Crit, I'd be tempted to go portrait, just feels a tad wid to me.
nowt wrong with lines for me... the only thing I couldn't have stopped myself doing, would be to clone the right hand light, across to the left hand one too. So they are both the same.
like that...darkness suits it as shows the light on the tracks really well....portrait crop may well suit better as Andy mentioned , looks a tad wide maybe a smidge ccw rotation though ?
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