Good start for week 1, I like the moire pattern and personally don't mind the angle on the subject either. Only crit I would give is its a bit dark. I think it might be good to see more of the hand and device other than its screen.
I like the most recent yellow line one better I think. That's a good spot, made me chuckle. I am not sure exactly what I find appealing about it....it has good colour and brightness, and looks really spot on in terms of focus and DoF in my opinion, shame about the camber of the road though I think.