Hi everyone, thanks very much for all the comments. Both pics could certainly be improved, the knife in the bible pic was quite awkward to light, I tried numerous placings of my flash, but the blade just seem to be missed, I could really do with a wireless trigger, I was relying on my built in flash triggering my nissin 622 unit. The apple on the 2nd pic again, I think actually this became a little obscure during processing it. I was going for a very dark feeling on both of these, for my first official shot of the week I reckon I will go with the bible version.