Hi Peter
Good to see your work again and a very strong start.
Lines - very well handled , very painterly feel to it. Good colours and crop. Very nice example of the technique (incidentally you have pointed out some of your earlier tries at this on another thread - they are truly 'orrible
)
Play - excellent. Well handled colours and lighting. It has immediate impact with 'shine', good comp with the diag of the instrument and the lesser diag of the music ( and i do think that the music adds a lot to the shot because of the contrast of its clean lines and neutral b/g).
Excellent separation of the instrument from the b/g. All in all a brilliant shot.