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Darn it....missed your Positive shot......on theme for sure but not really keeping my attention though I do like the lighting on the batteries
Darn it....missed your Positive shot......on theme for sure but not really keeping my attention though I do like the lighting on the batteries
the funny thing is I will probably do something simple too lolThank you for your comments, I agree I can do better just don't know what to do. I will think on it over the weekend.
Hi Mandy, love your ending shot with the superb flowery thing (whatever it is).
Like Blondie said, your first positive image was good but not keeping interest. I much prefer the one of the laying down Procells as they also show the + on it and the composition is more interesting to me. I don't like the super bright edit of your first composition though, it's very harsh looking.
I'm liking the edit 'a different point of view' a lot more Mandy very simple but has more impact for me
Your 2nd attempts so much better.
Much prefer the cleaner white BG.
Like the batteries lying down also good use of DOF on this. OCD time I'm afraid, the 2nd from left needs slight A/CW turn
Seems I have funny eyes but I prefer your first version. I prefer the darker background and there is something else about it...hang on a minute, having another look...
...ok got it.
What does it for me is the top of the batteries as not only do you have Positive in the shape of all the batteries and Positive in the way up the batteries are but also around the rim of the top of the batteries you have a red hemisphere facing forward -- the positive -- and a black hemisphere facing backwards -- a negative or neutral.
Ah Haaaaa liking the last shot Mandy best of all, I like shots like this that have a thin plain in focus and fading away sharply, nicely lined up again and good to see the + in sight and focus again
Edit 1 is better. Much better clarity and sharpness.
the edited plus layout is wonderful but i actually prefer the end on shot either way great work
well done on getting a few reshoots in - FWIW I acually prefer the first.
The first (cross one) on white is too bright and has no shadow and seems OOF on first glance, as the focus is on the lower one...
The laying down one has the needed shadow but suffers on alligmnent which was great in the first (on black) one. ALso the bumps don't seem to come forward in this.
The first has very little to crit TBH and has the double link to the theme.
I think it's all been said Mandy, I prefer the edited positive, better exposure and holds attention longer.
I like your first take the best Mandy
A bit late commenting this week but it allows me to see all 3 of your shots
I like the idea of the + shape but prefer the final end on shot.
Nice idea.
I find the scratch on the 10 and 8 a little distracting though.
Must be time for tea
I have to agree with Mark about the scratches, they also cast a shadow onto the face unfortunately
On theme picture, which means I now need to think of something else
Hi Mandy
Some very nice detail, don't mind the scratches myself I think it adds character (be tempted to clone them off the background though), not sure on the blue tinge but guessing that's the watch rather than the lighting, liking the diagonal grain to the background too
Works for me Mandy, great detail
Time i like it, the whitish marks to the right of the watch are a bit distracting but love the colour, nice job from me
You've not gone for the standard 10 to 2 position of watch adverts, nice change. I'm missing the bit at the top, is it a winder, a nurses keyfob clasp, a strap, who knows?