Odd - I can see where you're going with this but I feel it is too dark.
Linear/Line - What a great take on the theme. The tone you've added suits this well
Phil ... Play-Doh it hasn't changed a bit .... the toadstools were good fun to make but they kept falling over so they slowly became a bit mis-shaped
My original plan was for colour, but I took a few in black and white just to see how they looked and in the end I preferred that version.
I like the lighting on this, could maybe do with a touch more on the toadstool on the left. Looks really good though. Would be good to see the colour version too.
Odd - A nice idea just a little dark
Line - Excellent take on theme and well executed
Play - Like this one the B&W suits and well composed a touch more light on the RH side maybe
think I'd also like a colour one here, although the high contrast B&W works...
the position of the mushrooms also gives the hint of the ground that they are stood on, its easy to end up with things "floating" when you go for a black background and foreground
Thank you for the comments folks, much appreciated I did just take a look at my colour one but it really isn't worth putting on here...tooooo many silly mistakes
As to the lighting on the left...I do agree, I even noticed it when I was taking it, so it's my own fault that it's not right. I absolutely promised myself not to rush it this week and pay attention to detail....mmmm...that's one promise broken.
The shadow on the right hand tub is annoying me too....I have just realised that it's where some Play-Doh was left in the pot
the toad stools look like a work of art , mono shouldn't really work as play doh is so colourful nut it does work for some reason....lovely lighting with comments same as others have mentioned but they really are minor points... I think I'd prefer a smidge less space at the bottom of the shot though
As for your 2nd image...brilliant tweak , very 60's look to it....
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