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well done on perservering with the smoke images, great starting points for making some smoke art from.
mineral, another b**ger of a theme, I'm struggling to get excited by this tbh, seems like theres some of the pinapple missing too, and the sides of the bottle look to have blown out a bit?
Sorry if that's harsh and also not very constructive.... feel free to rip into mine this week in reply.
No worries Grahsm.... there is something not quite right about the image,,,I shuld have gone for a more straight copy of the image I saw.....as for pineapple missing.....yup , it's filled with water.....
I'm not sure about mineral, all the different elements seem unconnected somehow? Nice colours and light though.
Thanks Suv....the connection was a bottle of mineral water with pineapple flavouring & a piece of pineapple filled with mineral water
Hi Lynn...As mentioned before....the colour scheme is spot on...I like the second edit where the bottle is more prominet...Just not sure about the pineapple though, maybe that the perspective is wrong?
Cheers Jason....this is a shot I'm gonna keep working on...it's almost there but not quite ...& you may be onto something with the perspective.....
Cheers Alan....it's going to be a work in progress to try n get it right....good job I like pineappleHi Lynne
Mineral - mixed comments which I can understand. I like the idea but there is something about it that does not work. I prefer #1 for the fact that the story is about the pineapple supplying the flavour to the water - in #2 the pineapple seems too small. Probably a combination of them both as the bottle is too small in #1. I like the idea of the bright sunny colour but maybe just a bit too bright.