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Hi Lynne,
Good effort on the weave shots. I love the fact that you have looked at new angles to shoot "boring old furniture" with! With the first shot I think it really needs a focus hook, like if there was a patch of furniture with a broken cane? Or a screw etc... Something to just lift us from the sea of cane!
I love the textures and light on the second cane shot, for me there are some really good dark dirty textures just under the horizontal section.
Your tapestry shot #1 is a clincher for me!
The rest are not needed in my opinion. The low angle, shallow DOF and colours make the first shot stand alone. The rest are just a record of the whole and don't add anything to the ability of the first shot to stand alone. Sometimes it is enough to say to the viewer, this is all you are going to see!
But overall a good eye for looking at the mundane in a non obvious way! Well done.
Adie
Good effort on the weave shots. I love the fact that you have looked at new angles to shoot "boring old furniture" with! With the first shot I think it really needs a focus hook, like if there was a patch of furniture with a broken cane? Or a screw etc... Something to just lift us from the sea of cane!
I love the textures and light on the second cane shot, for me there are some really good dark dirty textures just under the horizontal section.
Your tapestry shot #1 is a clincher for me!
The rest are not needed in my opinion. The low angle, shallow DOF and colours make the first shot stand alone. The rest are just a record of the whole and don't add anything to the ability of the first shot to stand alone. Sometimes it is enough to say to the viewer, this is all you are going to see!
But overall a good eye for looking at the mundane in a non obvious way! Well done.
Adie