Certainty spot on for the theme, it might have been nice to see more of the entrance.
<edit>That sounds a bit blunt, so apologies and I don’t know how high the columns at either side of the door are so maybe there was no choice to get more of them in but hopefully you know what I intended… </edit>
Hi David. Hmmm! There's quite a few things I like about this shot - people and movement and the alignment of the chrome handrail & brackets leading the viewer in. Most of all though, I like the architectural contrast between the modern walkway and the old columns. (Had to Google Raymond & Beverly Sackler ... learnt something in the process so that's another plus).
.....selective colouring then? [emoji14]Nooooo. Don't B&W it!!!
It works well as it is. The birghtness / colours of the lady on the right draw the eye. I felt you were shooting 'an entrance' rather than 'an entranceway', so having the eye drawn in that way makes it work imo. I think that in B&W you would lose that pull.
I like the framing of the title to the entrance, handrails and especially the reflection of the woman to the right. There's something about the other three people that doesn't quite grab me in the shot. Maybe because I'm not sure (or that curious) what the two men are looking at.
Works for me the balustrade help lead you into the picture
David, I quite like the reflection in the glass to the right, the subtle lighting. Tend to agree colour not b&w
Chris
Thanks for your crit.You been sneeking up behind people again, I like it and you are right it doesn't need to be in B+W, not sure I agree with the "black and white is for arty shadowy trickery" colour for this was the better choice
Entrance, I blab on about Alexey Titarenko now and again, but this would really suit his style.
Nice and close, and well composed.
Cheers Paul. They're both marmite I know. I shot the tins of paint 7 wide 3 shelves high, when viewed on my PC they were distorted so I went back to the shop to shoot again: 12 wide 6 high and cropped it down, much less distortion. But anyway, I don't know why it's soft at the edges. The Entrance was also cropped down in PP, minimalistic and finer detail being my preference, and I preferred this one over similar shots because the two guys have their heads turned being more interesting than backs of heads only.Hiya David
Colourful - works really well and I like your composition a lot. The only distraction for me personally is I find the softness at the edge of the frame a bit distracting. Not sure if it's a lens issue or simply depth of field (since most lenses have a curved focal "plane")?
Entrance - an interesting shot but I want it to tell me more of a story. Why was it shot and what is it saying about the people going in? It feels as if it should be more than a picture "just" of an entrance... However, good use of leading lines to draw the viewer in. I'm feeling conflicted on this - strong aspects yet a sense of something not quite 100%? Sorry!
thank you IanLove that. Size comparison conveyed through the comparatively small man in the middle and bright colours filling the rest. Keeps it interesting and is framed really well. Good stuff.
you know I didn't notice that door, well that alone gives an indication of size. He was just pacing up and down as they do on the mobile, cigarette in other hand flicking the ash off. Cheers Carl.Yes, I agree with Ian about the contrast in size. Must be massive if this is just one quarter !!! That doorway is nicely camouflaged - do you suppose he's trying to get directions to it? Make a great pic for captions !
thanks ChrisWow! that's some sizeable ad. Good that the guy is wearing a bright jacket, gives the photo a good sense of scale.
Thanks Chris it's a hoarding, and I've just edited my post above with details. It is in fact on the reverse of something more erm prestigious: The third largest digital site in the UKGreat David, need the guy so you can truley appreciate the 'size' nicely framed. Is it a hoarding, shop front ?
Thanks Allan It's a place I'm quite familiar with and I was hanging around for quite a while for the subject to show.I thought it was something you had photoshopped at first,
that's a seriously large advert as said above needs the person in front for scale but well spotted
Thanks BossVery nice David, very colourful and to the point
Thanks so much for all your kind words Lee.Hi David,
Horizontal - love this simple but so effective
Vast - a good and different take on the theme
Rough - Great colours and textures there
Covered - this is a very good, NYC kind of shot, bet this would look good in B&W, superb as it is.
Colourful - this was my initial idea but never got round to any large enough shops. This is good because of the pastel colours as brighter colours would have been to obvious.
Entrance - cool shot, great lines and framing, love the reflection of the woman's bright skirt.
Size - Epic photograph, the colours, framing and the gesture is perfection.
and Mark ... thank you.Size - That's an impressive advert! Loving the colours and details. THe guy in the Red coat really stands out and adds to the sense of scale.