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Who's bought practical photography?
Nope... why is that mate ??Who's bought practical photography?
Who's bought practical photography?
Nope... why is that mate ??
Hi Iain,
Sense, the cathedral shot looks amazing on Flickr. I like the whole curvy effect! What do you do in processing to get that deep textured/ contrasty feel; I can’t even explain what I mean! I’m hoping you know what I mean from that obscure question!!! But yay, a crit point, it looks a little squiffy at the bottom, maybe a little straighten, rotate needed!
Feet, ah, may not be pebbles, but feet still get in there!!!Nice contrast, how did you do this?
Ending, somebody pass me a crowbar, or possible a shoehorn!!! Great contrast and I particularly like the reflections on the spoon.
I agree with DK about the knife being too low, but I prefer the original composition, it’s a military thing (more army I think) as we always go away with our own KFS set packed!!! The military (and probably your lot) love a TLA!
Hi Iain
think I prefer the edit of Ending...sits better with my OCD super slim DOF , mono suits to a tee & I like the fretwork base However..... I do find the reflection in the spoon of the said fretwork base a trifle distracting.....
I like your second edit for Ending, and for me it fits the theme with the focus being at the end of the cutlery. Very well composed and processed and great use of depth of field.
I prefer the edited one myself.
It has an almost surgical feel to it
Hi Iain
All influences aside, I genuinely think that the concept of the ends of these common cutlery bits fits the theme. Well laid out in the edited version and a lovely silvery b&w feel. edit not quite symmetrical and I think that I would like a bit more dof on the cutlery. But super shot nonetheless - and full marks for spending a whole £10 on a prop - I hope that you can get further use from it
Ending....... yes I think it fits too.....what else are they if not the cutlery ends?
Edited version for me too Iain, them fork tine ends look pin sharp to me
Hi Iain, I do like them both and not that much of a crowbar needed
they are both nicely lit etc, just not your usual work
onwards and upwards
Well its colourful and you have some patience Iain took mi a second to realise that its two face profiles ........my missus is sat looking over my shoulder, straight away, she said that it would look better in B&W ........its unusual for me, but I might have to agree with her
Nice and colourful. I find it a bit distracting as I want it to be perfectly symmetrical but bottom LHS is pushed in more than the RHS. I'd be interested to see a B&W as well.
And as if by magic there it is
I actually like it and find the lack of symmetry at the bottom not so noticeable
A B&W conversion, I am not sure about this to be honest, I like the vivid colours of the pencils but am open to opinions?
Its a toughie.............I like the colour version, but we are in agreement that the B&W version is easier to make out the profiles
The patience of a saint !!!!
I'm preferring the colour one myself, feels 'Springy' too... at first I thought you had done one side then flipped it, not until I looked at each corresponding tip did I notice they were different, really liking the bright colours
Wondering how it would look with a grey or pastel background rather than the bright white
Not that I'm trying to get you to set them up again
Hahaaaaa you fcuker... i still have the pencils set up with some sellotape holding them in place
Hahaaaaa you fcuker
Very colourful and sharp, I prefer the colour to the black and white for your patience, surprised that you can see at all after setting that up
no don't blame you at all... Wish I had thought of that when I tried to do my shot with only a dozen pencils... Was driving me nutsDo you blame me?
Do you realise how much of a faff it was setting those rascals up? I wanted to wring every last photo opportunity out of them before I put them back in their boxes
Colour for me, all the way.
Cracking idea and well thought out. What's that at the top? Looks like it has a hat one .
I might have been tempted to do one side and flip in post
Cheers.
no don't blame you at all... Wish I had thought of that when I tried to do my shot with only a dozen pencils... Was driving me nuts
Hi Iain
Ending - prefer the 2nd edit with the knife in the middle. Like the reflection in the spoon too, really like the metal holey stuff (excuse the techno speak please!) what is it?
Positive - really really like the colour version, although the B&W I guess makes it slightly more obvious its 2 heads. Great work as always and well worth the time spent setting it up
Loving the colour version - on the white background those colours just leap out at you!
Took me a mo to realise what you'd done with the shaping of them though
Hi Iain, just for the patience to do that, if I had a hat it would be off now
colour one for me though I would like to see the pencils in a different order
I do have one crit crop the top a little the top 2 or 3 pencils are a little disturbing
the more i look at them though the B+W is quite appealing too
good work as always
The colour for me as well, another creative idea from you I like it very much.
Ending - a classy shot. Great lighting and DoF.
Positive - colour works much much better than the b/w conversion. It's a good idea for the theme too.