Wow,
for all the comments and feedback, and sorry I haven't been around for a few days. I will definitely get around to everyone's threads asap, and I hope to be up to date again by the weekend.
Hi Andrea - I love the colours in metal and the exposure is spot on. I might prefer a tiny bit more DOF but that's being quibbly for the sake of it! Love it as a starter for 10.
Captive - very imaginative shot and well spotted. Maybe a squeeze more shadow detail but lovely cloud pattern behind really makes the image for me - the contrast is super.
A great pair of shots and looking forward to more of yours!
Thank you for looking in and taking the time to comment, Paul. I did try some shots with wider DOF for Metal but settled on this one as it seemed to best suit the texture and pattern of that particular bar. It's a location I will revisit now I know just what sort of textures are there, though. I agree on the shadow detail in Captive; it was very dark in those corners and unfortunately I was working with a JPG rather than RAW so there isn't much more to be had this time
Thankfully the brief glimpse of blue sky rescued me
Hi Andrea that was lucky catching that blue sky, it really adds to the captive feel of the bars ...lots of lovely colour and texture there too.
Thanks Susie, it really was a stroke of good luck, as the weather otherwise was pretty wild!
Hi Andrea.
I like what ou've done with this shot, it's a great find.
I may have been tempted to darken the 'inside' wall in PP so that it wasn't obvious you were outside in the light, but that's just a minor thing.
Thanks for looking in and commenting, Tim, and I agree with your idea about darkening the wall. I wish I'd thought of that!
That's a nice image Andrea - like it. Well done coping wit the extreme lighting as well - you've managed to keep the darker details around the window without blowing the sky. Excellent.
Thanks very much for dropping in and leaving feedback, Carl.
Hi Andrea
great images to start your 52 challenge love the detail in Metal and in Captive too for that matter
Thanks for looking in, Mark; much appreciated.
Hi Andrea, I really like the 'captive' image, the contrast of the blue sky against the dark metal and stone, it does indeed give the feeling of being captive!
Thank you, Liz. I think the patch of blue sky was essential so I'm glad the weather complied!
nice couple of takes, rust on #1 really adds to pic,
#2 works really well nice BG through the bars
Thanks for dropping by and commenting, Walter. Much appreciated and I'll be along to look at your thread asap
... gives the feeling of being 'captive' ... sure does.
Thanks, David
Andrea Hi, rust is good, some many ways and places to photograph it, really liking the DoF of the Metal and the glimmer of hope through the window
Thank you, Lee. Yes, I'll definitely be going back to both locations to see what else I can see
Fantastic colours on your first shot and well focused on the rusty bit. The fort shot really does give a feeling of being captive and I would never have guessed that you took it from outside
Thanks Elaine, much appreciated
I'm looking forward to visiting your thread as soon as I'm up to date!
Hi
Metal - love the DOF giving focus to the rust - lovely and sharp and wonderful colours throughout - like it !
Captive - I like the POV and looking up through the barred window it really adds to the feeling of being captive - very nice Andrea
Thanks for dropping by and commenting, Jon. I'm looking forward to visiting your thread
Welcome back Andrea.
Metal and Captive....both excellent and theme fitting.
Glad you're feeling better!
Thank you very much, Ruth. I hate being behind like this, and after a further setback I'm aiming to post the rest this week!
Hi I am a little late to the party of comments, sorry to hear you were ill. Glad your better now, I am poorly at the moment, but I do like your start to your challenge.
Hi Mandy, thanks for looking in and commenting. The cold has gone, but I'm confined to quarters now with a poorly leg ;banghead: I think perhaps they should just shoot me! Hope you're feeling better soon and I'll be over to see your thread asap.
My first visit to your 52, hope you have recovered from illness. This weather really isn't good for getting out is it, I'm looking forward to getting out for some of my shots later in the year as I take way to many indoor ones and want to change that this year.
Metal - nicely seen, I like the contrast in the colours of the rust and green metal. The Point of focus is perfect just where the rust starts and the very shallow DOF is something I like.
Captive - well done for getting out in 65mph winds! Good shot, says captive well especially with that blue sky through the bars.
Thanks for dropping by, Steve. I wish this wet windy weather would do one. I don't mind the cold, but this damp winter is getting me down! It looks as though you're the other way around to me; I've never done much indoor photography and tend to avoid it, but it might become essential for a little while. Thank you for your comments, and I'll be along to visit your thread very soon.