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Hahaaaaa that's a fun image Craig, I can tell your guy is laying down in a recovery type position, and sort of hugging the chocolate bar... nice idea
Hmmmm is that supposed to be rotated to portrait
Nice idea for the theme and see you've lost the pole this time Good black BG and nicely lit from the side (or underneath)
lighting on the manneguin is nice, creating good shadows and highlights, inclusion of the choc bar gives it anweirdinteresting twist.
thought behind the positioning??
Hmmm .. like this one
(but that's only because I've got a dirty mind .. probably)
woops ... that's the wooden man cuddling the chocolate bar ... I like.
but I also like the red stuff in water (or is it smoke?)
Time - fits the theme nice composition I like it.
Well done for trying the smoke again.....I find the shapes fascinating, and I really like them, I would be tempted to do a much tighter crop on this one to show the main two shapes.
Time out ....looks fine to me
Hi reshoot not really doing it for me, sorry don't really know what to say about it except there seems no definition to it.
Time - Somebody said the model was hugging the time bar. It must be my mind but it looks like it's doing something else to it
Reshoot - I'm afraid this doesn't work for me. It feels oof and maybe not enough smoke.
Swirl - This on the other hand is spot on. I like how you haven't been scared to put it on a slight angle and also a reasonably shallow DoF which throws the background out but you can still tell it is more cakes. Nice one.
a few other have mentioned the time out bar but I think you all got dirty minds
Reshoot...either not enough smoke, too much flash or PP issues, as said not enough smoke.
Swirl....gimme....gimme...gimme...
Nice colours, slight tilt. I'd like to see it a bit closer.
Cheers.
Super pic ..... a smashing swirl ......Nice angle and focus....and the cakes look delicious too.
Add me to the list too Craig
Swirl- looks well lit, exposed, good contrasting colours on the butter cream topping......you got any left over?
super swirls, getting there now craig, , maybe a tad brighter and something says a bit of a crop off the right (maybe just loosing the two rightmost silver balls)
overall, very nice though, I'm liking the angle, and the shallow DOF, oh and the cakes.
You win me over with cake!
Hi Craig
Smoke reshoot......not really able to crit but not enough smoke ?
Swirl...going against the majority here...I'm not keen on the tilt ( but then I am odd !)not sure why but it just feels awkward to me , I do like the colors , the DOF & super sharpness
Smoke - Nice colours but looks OOF to me and not to keen on the grey BG. Also agree to either more smoke or tighter crop.
Swirl - There look like some seriously good cakes. Nice and sharp and against my normal taste I do in fact like the tilt
Hi Craig
Swirl - now THEY look LOVELY, a couple of them would go down very nicely with a Coffee at the moment
I'm liking your composition with the white cupcake surrounded by the two rose ones, the cases are nice and subtle keeping the eye on the coloured sprinkles, nice angle too - Like It