Hi Ian ....catch up time for me.
FREE I've no idea why you weren't happy with it, I think its excellent, super colours, and lots of detail, an very eye catching shot.
ENTRANCE That looks very spooky indeed, I also like the second one, perfect choice in the b& white, it emphasizes the reflection in the puddle.
YOUNG That's so natural, I love the way they're not all posing, kids having fun ...just the way it should be.
FOOD I've got those egg cups

I like the choice of the black background it sets it off well and the addition of the spoon is spot on, perfect for the theme.
SMOOTH I think this one is my favourite, well done with putting that one together with the separate images, perfect reflection, they almost look as if they're floating on water, the colours make it special too.
ABOVE Your patience paid off ...a perfect choice for the theme!